[Fiction] the noble wife

[faorism]

Title: the noble wife
Series: Naruto
Pairing and Genre: Naruto/Sakura/Sasuke. Romance.
Words and Progress: 1000; Complete.
Notes: M. Set post-series. Featuring polyamory. For polyship's smut comment fic meme (prompt: N/S/S; worst kept secret ever). Originally posted here.
Summary: There are times when she feels the confused, judgmental gaze of someone who

Comments

ITS CUZ I TREAD IN FIC WRITING, PERIOD. I NEED TO WRITE MORE SRSLY

[faorism]

I DON'T KNOW WHERE THIS CAME FROM EITHER. I don't even really ship this UNTIL NOW? but I saw the prompt and knew I had to write for it.

DUDE. BTW. That night when Sasuke learns how to "pleasure" Sakura? It would be amazing and fucking hilarious. All I keep picturing is Sakura lying between Naruto's legs with Sasuke trying (and kinda failing) to eat her out and omg he's kinda freaking out because it's the first time he's seen a vajayjay. And Sakura and Naruto keep laughing at him because he's so bad, and Naruto is in complete disbelief because "Wow, Sasuke is shit at this." And at one point Sakura screams/laughs "HOLY FUCK, SASUKE, NO, NOT THAT, IT'S NOT A COCK." And Sasuke is indignant but fuck is he devoted and well-meaning, and when he's not causing pain to her, Sakura is laughing her ass off and Naruto just takes it all in stride. Only after Sasuke is basically man-crying does Naruto&Sakura remember that if Sasuke watches Naruto do it with his Sharingan, then he would know how. Sasuke would then throw the HUGEST hissy fit.

Re: ITS CUZ I TREAD IN FIC WRITING, PERIOD. I NEED TO WRITE MORE SRSLY

[kieragolightly]

I AM LAUGHING SO HARD OMG SO HARD.

THIS IS AMAZING HNNNN

i've never read a polyamory fic but i was so intrigued when i saw this on the sasusaku community. really, REALLY good! i loved this, even though i'm hardcore sasusaku, meaning gay awkward sauce is hardly present in the fics i read, but this was tres amazing.♥

ND PLEASE WRITE SASUKE'S FIRST TIME THAT IS BEAUTIFUL

[faorism]

SOMETIMES REALLY SILLY, REALLY BAD THINGS COME INTO MY HEAD. IDK, I AM CRAZY.

I was worried about posting it to the S/S comm because I didn't know if there would be an audience at all for it, but I'm glad I did. :D I'm actually hardcore Sasuke/Naruto myself, so this was a bit different for me. BUT YEAH, even in this triad, I cannot fully remove my headcanon of Sasuke being gay BUT IT TOTES MAKES the Sasuke/Sakura part of the triad about a billion times better imo. :)

IDK. I HATE WRITING THE ACTUAL SMUT OF PWP (as is obvious in this fic, since I stopped at the good part...). BUT I WILL THINK ABOUT IT. ♥

[anat_astarte]

Ooooh, beautiful work! ♥

[faorism]

Thank you! ♥

[eclats_de_voix]

awmahgawd faor. I love you!!!! Can I say that? So I haven't really ever read naruto fanfiction cause it got so annoying how much of a jerk sasuke, so I haven't even read it in I want to say six years, But I had to read this because I wrote a report last year for college on the culture of the polygamist mormons in Utah. Just had too, jeez, your going places kid :3 this is awesome! Its like the defined difference between what might be considered healthy and unhealthy polygamy (and the other kind marriage, one girl with two guys, the word that no one uses).

[faorism]

You can totally say it! I LOVE YOU TOO.

I'm honored to be your first Naruto fanfiction in so long a time. GEE. (But I totally get what you mean: except for kakairu for the fest I co-mod, I basically don't touch naruto ff because... I'M SAD TO SAY that there has been very little good stories to read.)

That sounds like a crazy interesting report, one that I'll love to read! I'm very interested in "alternative" lifestyles, aka, ones that don't line up with a vanilla/monogamous/heteronormative/et cetra relationship (not that there's anything wrong with that!).

I think that the relationship I described for the daimyo and his wives can be a healthy relationship model, but for others, it isn't. I like to believe the Noble Wives are doing well and are happy with their marriage arrangement. BUT yeah, if I had a choice, I would pick N/S/S's relationship type any day. I prefer the idea of a more equal relationship in my polyamory. :)

[eclats_de_voix]

ACTUALLY, you are my first naruto fanfcition (not the first one in a long time) I just haven't read the manga in forever. I guess I can post the essay, since its still saved to my laptop. It narrows into the case of the rape of Elisa Wall, who was married to her cousin when she was 14.

There aren't very many good stories in any fandoms, so I hear, and even archives like lunascensce, though they have people on grammar and spell check, never really publish anything worth reading even still.

When it comes to love, whatever your preference is. There still is a whole debate about it when it come to the midwest, since they still practice it albeit not legally. Though it can sometimes be all right and happy, most of the time, the women aren't married off because of love.

But who are we to judge? Like, no one marries for love anymore with the divorce rate at 50%.

[faorism]

I AM MAKING THE SILLIEST DOE EYES RIGHT NOW OMG.

There are some gorgeous ones in every fandom, you just have to really look for it. :\

Yes! Post it. I'll read it. ♥

[hiza_chan]

THIS IS SO PERFECT AND AMAZING AND WONDERFUL. MORE PRAISE WHEN I DON'T NEED TO BE UP IN SEVEN HOURS.

/SCREAMS

[faorism]

I am slowly getting suspicious that I should just only write polyamory.

NO YOU ARE PERFECT AND AMAZING AND WONDERFUL. ♥

[betterinorange]

Not usually a fan of this ship(?) but I always read anything you write for the fandoms I'm into and just ♥

[faorism]

I'm not a fan of it much either lol, but I saw the prompt and knew I wanted to write something for it.

AWWWWWWWWWWH. Thank you! ♥