Fic for kaleidopy

[arahiril]

Title: Night Vigil
For kaleidopy
By roh_wyn
Characters: Faramir, Boromir, Ithilien Rangers, Imrahil, Denethor, Gandalf
Rating: G
Genre: General
Warnings: None.

kaleidopy had requested: A pre-ring story. I'm easy to please.

Comments

[arahiril]

This is completely adorable!! I thought they were hunting a boar or something. :) But there's actually a lot of little subtleties that make this rather clever - such as the irony of Mithrandir's words being used to cheer up Denethor, and Faramir bailing out his brother with an explanation.

Lovely little fic, thanks so much for participating!! (And thanks for the great formatting job too. :) )

[roh_wyn]

Thanks...not just for reading and for your comment, but also for running this exchange. I think it's a really fun thing, for writers and readers.

[little_dwarf]

Wow, this is a very, very nice story! And definitely well-written too! You did a great job at creating suspense, the characterization was realistic (even if or heros are kids, they are still so much like themselves!) and the resolution was simply great! As a future English teacher, I give you an A+ for this ! :)

I really liked your clever, if brief, portrayal of the two brothers, their different motivations for accepting this 'mission' and the way each of them thinks about the other...

Thanks for an excelent read! :)

[roh_wyn]

Oooo, an A+ from an English teacher...that's the sort of stuff I live for! :)

I'm glad you liked the story. Thanks for reading.

[little_dwarf]

*Future* English teacher, that is... :)

It was a pleasure to read this, so thanks again for your story, it's wonderful! :)

[lilan14]

Okay, you completely fooled me with this one and kept me on the very edge of my chair here!! What a cool story. :-D I love the very way it's written, with all those little fragments that work so well together!

Well done indeed! :)

[roh_wyn]

Heh. Thanks a lot. You know it means a lot to me to get compliments from you on any of my stories! Much appreciated.

[sarasrati34]

Oh, fabulous! What a twist at the end! It is a very enjoyable and cute story indeed. Nicely done!

[roh_wyn]

Thanks for reading. Glad you liked.

[enkemeniel]

*LOL* *snort* *giggles*

[roh_wyn]

Glad to amuse, as always! :)