Femslash

Aug 16, 2012 19:38

Title: End of the Night
Wordcount: ~4500
Rating: NC17
Pairing: always-a-girl!Dean/always-a-human-girl!Cas
Genre: AU civilian FEMSLASH
Warning: brief mentions of OC!child-abuse
Beta: ilfirin_estel
Notes: So, behold the only salvageable bit of my failed deancasbigbang. Hopefully I'll end up writing a sequel, which will give me the story I wanted. Just not the readers I'd get ( Read more... )

nc-17, dean/castiel, fic, femslash, one-shot, spn

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kim47 August 17 2012, 04:03:15 UTC
This is incredible, scorching hot, amazing characterisation and just, god. I would read the hell out of a sequel ♥

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888mph August 17 2012, 23:09:26 UTC
Hopefully the muses will be kind. Thanks!

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Edition 2,305 livejournal August 17 2012, 04:21:16 UTC
User lesson_in_love referenced to your post from Edition 2,305 saying: [...] by (Lucifer/Sam; R) End of the Night [...]

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andlightplay August 17 2012, 19:49:56 UTC
I always knew this was gonna be amazing bb, and what do you know, it totally is. They're both so in character and everything rings true and as always I need a moment to recover because stripper!Deanna *_________*

(I am SO sorry I haven't been around to help you with it, but RL is kind of crazy rn and I honestly haven't had the time. I'm glad you managed to salvage at least some of it though <3)

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888mph August 17 2012, 23:11:08 UTC
Knowing that I kept them in character after changing the setting, the background, the gender and in one case even the species is what matters. ♥

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charie_caphine August 17 2012, 23:59:29 UTC
Can't unsee the zombie-ness of the girls in the painting now. =)

Please write a sequel! Another 100+k words of a sequel or whatever. This story is exciting, very very hot, intriguing, and beautiful, but also oh-so-short.

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888mph August 31 2012, 01:07:15 UTC
Heh, I'm an art historian and I LOVE Schiele, so I have to say it pained me a little to call them that. But don't they look exactly like girl!Cas and girl!Dean? :D

Dude! 100+k?! This fandom will be the death of me...

Thanks! ♥

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seraphim_grace August 18 2012, 01:34:12 UTC
you know I wrote stripper girl!dean once, but you made yours sexy and mine was perfunctory (deliberately so btw)

The joy of Dean is that it's very easy to make him a girl, history has put him in the feminine roles, his masculinity is no different from a girl keeping up with the boys. That said it's amazing how many people completely mess that up and make him a girly girl, when all you need to do is change the pronoun.

Have you ever read the Sandman comics. In Volume 7 (I can be that specific) there is a scene in a strip club where Dream goes to visit a goddess of love who is working there. it's heartbreaking and beautiful and tragic all in one go. That is what your story reminded me of.

Even if Mr Adler did put me in mind of Chubby from My name is earl, but that's a whole different part of the mind.

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