whenever i'm with you i feel more alive

[kaiwynn]

whenever i'm with you i feel more alive
susan/lucy. pg13. 336.
He stumbles, they bury their hands in his mane. It is purely by coincidence that the sisters' fingers end up linked.
for kirstie (lullabylucky) for supporting my femslash obsession and also for giving me pretty music :) this is a shipper's take on the "aslan dies" scene in lww. book!canon. go

Comments

[thaerestt]

Omg I just noticed you have been posting more fics LOL AM I SLOW OR WHAT?
HDU NOT TELL ME. YOU SHOULD SEND ME AN EMAIL OR SHOUT AT MY GENERAL DIRECTION.

Ok I'm going to read now. But I'm scared of the awesome. You're spoiling me. Next time I'll read a book and say "KAI DID IT BETTER HDU WRITE SOMETHING" and THROW IT OUT THE WINDOW AND HIT SOMEONE IN THE FACE. YES I LIKE TO HIT PEOPLE IN THE FACE. IT'S FUN. LOL I'M VIOLENT TODAY

AND I'M TOTALLY GOING TO READ IT NOW.

[kaiwynn]

LOL IT'S OKAY. I PURPOSELY HAVEN'T PIMPED THIS FIC YET BECAUSE I'M WAITING FOR KIRSTIE TO ANSWER MY COMMENT LOL. BUT HAHAHA I WILL TELL YOU NEXT TIME.

WAY TO BE VIOLENT BB.

YAY READING.

[thaerestt]

YAY I'M THE FIRST TO READ THIS THEN, IT'S SO AWESOME. AND MY CAPSLOCK KEY IS STUCK.

OMG I LOVE THE LAST PHRASE. IT'S SO BEAUTIFULLY POETIC (POETICALLY BEAUTIFUL?). I KINDA WANT TO PRINT IT IN LARGE FONT AND PUT IT SOMEWHERE THAT I CAN SEE WHEN I WAKE UP.

[kaiwynn]

YAY THANK YOU.

YOU SHOULD. YOU WOULD HAVE SUSAN/LUCY GOODNESS WITH YOU EVERY MORNING.

[sensations]

...

HOLY CRAP.

He never looks away from Susan and she wonders if that's disapproval in his eyes. She glances down. Lucy is much better at interacting with mythical beasts than she is.

OH MY GOD THAT IS SO ASLAN WITH HIS ... KNOWING AND BEING ALL WISE AND HAHAHAHAHA. HE DISAPPROVES. OH, ASLAN. WHEN WILL YOU LEARN?

Lucy's hands are warmer than his fur. Susan won't ever forget that.

*thud* oh my, this is just so pretty. like, it makes my heart warm (which is quite a change cause normally your fics make my heart hurt, you angster).

oh, and that last line. guh. shgfjfdhgjfd. THANK YOU SO MUCH. this is the best reward ever for giving someone something, lol.

this really just makes me happy inside. awwww.

[kaiwynn]

I HOPE YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU.

iugladfkghdagf. you make my heart warm, bb. lol i am such an angster, aren't i?

I AM NOW FOREVER IN THE REALM OF NARNIA FANFIC, THANKS TO YOU. DOES THIS MEAN THERE'S NO GOING BACK?

[sensations]

I HOPE YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU. IT IS ALL MUTUAL LOVE, MY BB.

rofl, rofl. yes. but so am i, so i can't even talk. it is like our default. angst and emo are defaulted for our writing.

OMG I AM SO INFLUENCING. NO. NEVERRRRRRR.

[kaiwynn]

LET US TAKE A RIDE ON THE LOVE TRAIN.

lol i know, we are so angsty. it makes me feel ~deep~, stfu. :D

OMGOMG I AM NOW STUCK IN THE DEATHTRAP OF FANDOM.

*shrug* oh well. lmaoo.

[poeticgrace]

*is blown away* congratulations, you've just converted me! i've never shipped susan/lucy until just now.

(Lucy's hands are warmer than his fur. Susan won't ever forget that.)

WOW.

that is all i can say.

WOW.

[kaiwynn]

thank you!!! i'm so glad someone liked it. yay for converts! ♥

[thunderclapped]

Hello. This is the FIRST Susan/Lucy fic I've ever read, and GOD IT IS NICE. It's so saccharine and made me smile because it is absolutely beautiful. Oh and the cut thingy, it reminded me of the Relient K song "The Only thing Worse Than Beating A Dead Horse Is Betting On One' :D Great job.

[kaiwynn]

really? YOU NEED TO GET OUT MORE. :D thank you very very much, it was my first susan/lucy fic to be writing, haha. the cut text was actually from "in between" by linkin park, but hey, whatever :)

[lettersandliars]

oh, i love this. there needs to be more femslash in the world, especially femslash like this. beautifully written and a little heartbreaking and just perfect.

[kaiwynn]

thank you ♥ i agree with the "more femslash" sentiment. hopefully i'll be able to help the dismal lack of it. :D