Comments | fateful_hour: stuck inside an open door

kaiwynn in fateful_hour

stuck inside an open door

Aug 08, 2008 19:30

stuck inside an open door
edward/bella. jacob/bella. r. 303.
Fanciful fabrics draped around her skin feel like cheating.
for whoajessica's birthday. i love you a lot. i can't believe i'm writing e/b for you. but hey, you asked for angsty and THIS ALMOST MADE ME CRY OMG.
flist, if you're looking at this going wtf...it's her fault.

( all you have to do is listen )

* twilight, pairing: bella/edward, fic type: drabbles, ? canon pairing, pairing: bella/jacob, pairing type: het, & fanfic ;

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whoajessica August 9 2008, 01:06:35 UTC

um, oh. my. god. holy crap.

this is SPECTACULAR. i can't believe you don't write e/b, like, ALL THE TIME if this is how you perceive them.

this is BRILLIANT.

Bella, he moans, eyes crushed closed, and she sobs.

She bites her cheek hard enough to taste copper (I would do it for you, I would do it for you) to keep from whispering his name.

that's when the tears, honest-to-god formed, in my eyes.

and the last line(s)... heartbreakingly beautiful.

i think i'm going to have to force you to write edward/bella more often, because you make it awesome and depressing and perfect. :)

whoajessica August 9 2008, 01:07:54 UTC

i totally fail at rereading for misplaced commas, btw. (that's when the tears, honest-to-god formed, in my eyes.) pretend you didn't see that, haha.

kaiwynn August 9 2008, 01:18:46 UTC

i only pretend because it's your birthday. :DD

kaiwynn August 9 2008, 01:08:22 UTC

...SORRY. stupid commenting skills.

anyway.

ahhhhh bb i am an emotional wreck right now! that fic made me so damn sad, and then here you are making me HAPPY. aldhgadgf. i love you so much and ykw...maybe you should force me. >.> I ACTUALLY LIKED WRITING THIS. thank you for showing me the angsty light, lol

i love youuuuuu!

yoursolace August 9 2008, 01:40:07 UTC

She bites her cheek hard enough to taste copper (I would do it for you, I would do it for you) to keep from whispering his name.

this is me broken.

why do you insist on breaking me?

kaiwynn August 9 2008, 01:41:29 UTC

i can put you back together?

yoursolace August 9 2008, 01:42:30 UTC

use some string to put my heart back into a whole piece.

also: LOL YOU HAVE TO PIMP THIS IN lion_lamb! /amusement at you being surrounded by e/b shippers.

kaiwynn August 9 2008, 01:44:51 UTC

LOL GOOD IDEA. watch them flock.

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yoursolace August 9 2008, 01:45:57 UTC

HAAAAAA. I JUST MENTIONED THAT.

kaiwynn August 9 2008, 01:47:34 UTC

LOL YOU TWO ARE BRAINTWINS.

yoursolace August 9 2008, 01:48:37 UTC

AT LEAST WHEN IT COMES TO YOUR FICS.

i hijack your comments.

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lilylines August 9 2008, 02:26:20 UTC

So beautiful. So Heartbreaking. I love your writing.

kaiwynn August 9 2008, 02:31:00 UTC

thank you!! <3

nuits_froides August 9 2008, 02:55:16 UTC

JESUS CHRIST KAI.
I AM DEAD.
HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.

YOU'RE AMAZING, BB.
SEE, I HAD TO *BOLD* IT TO ADD EMPHASIS ON YOUR AMAZING-NESS.

write more e/b, y/y?

everytime i write e/b, it's so fluffy, i end up choking :[

kaiwynn August 9 2008, 03:06:13 UTC

OMG DON'T DIE BB.

idk...it's e/b!!!!!!!

nuits_froides August 9 2008, 03:15:07 UTC

TOO LATE.
I'M DEAD.

IT'S ALL THANKS TO YOUUUUUUUU.

i like e/b where no one gets a happy ending.
i'm horrible :|

kaiwynn August 9 2008, 03:31:23 UTC

:OOOOOOO

I HAVE KILLED YOU MULTIPLE TIMES IT SEEMS?

oh i know. angst owns my soul :I

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