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Fanfic: The Seduction of Jimmy Wilson

Aug 27, 2006 09:49

Title: The Seduction of Jimmy Wilson
Pairing: House/Wilson
Rating: Let's call it NC-17, better to be safe than sorry.
Word Count: 6315
Spoilers: Not really. Vague references to Love Hurts, that's about it.
Author's Notes: Don't look at me, I just write it. THEY did this. Okay, so I poked them for some smut, but this wasn't quite what I originally ( Read more... )

smut, house/wilson, nc-17, fanfic

Comments 59

kiwi_from_hell August 27 2006, 01:07:17 UTC

Fantastic, definately one of the best things I've read in a while. It felt to me like you really nailed House's character in the POV; I loved the original styling and layout of the hypothesis and I love that House was in fact catching up to Wilson's feelings rather than uncovering them. Hot, sweet and in character. What more could a girl ask for?

fauxpocky August 28 2006, 08:04:48 UTC

Fantastic, definately one of the best things I've read in a while.

*blush* Aww, thank you!

It felt to me like you really nailed House's character in the POV

*huge sigh of relief* Oh good, cause the snarky-bastard side of things doesn't come naturally to me, and I wasn't sure how I'd done.

rosworms August 27 2006, 01:22:42 UTC

That was just plain awesome. i loved it.

fauxpocky August 28 2006, 08:06:13 UTC

Thank you!

PS: Iconlove! It's scary, but I can actually hear that phrase in Wilson's voice, laden with sarcasm ;)

nakannalee August 27 2006, 01:29:47 UTC

What an awesome read; so glad I decided to drop by this site one more time today. You really had me captivated throughout the fic. The narrative is both well-written and yet speckled with just enough "Housian" wit to keep it snarky in just the right spots. "We look like the world's worst three legged race team." Haha.

And I love the whole "hypothesis" setup you used. It worked well without being overbearing and taking total control of the story. Including each of the interns in their own separate parts was also well done, a nice touch. And GREAT job with the ending--it fit perfectly, without being melodramatic or banter-heavy, both of which could have lacked the credibility the beginning of this story set in place so nicely.

Wow, I'm a bit chatty tonight. But really, fantastic job, I loved this! :)

fauxpocky August 28 2006, 08:08:59 UTC

Chatty is good, I can live with chatty :D

And GREAT job with the ending

Thank goodness, I was worried about the ending because I've been sick the last week and the boys wouldn't play nice and let me write smut, and in the end I wrote half the final section while somewhat out of my skull on cold and flu meds. Which can be a good thing, but isn't always.

Thank you for the lovely feedback!

fondillusions August 27 2006, 01:50:10 UTC

I'm really not capable of writing coherent, after reading this amazing piece here! =-O That was extremely funny and hot at the same time and I had a great time reading and particularly, enjoying it! :)
Gave me goose bumps more than just once.
Awesome! :)

Thank you for writing and sharing it with us!!

fauxpocky August 28 2006, 08:09:40 UTC

Thank you for writing and sharing it with us!!

You're very welcome! Thank YOU for taking the time to reply :)

daasgrrl August 27 2006, 01:51:45 UTC

Utterly gorgeous. I loved the structure of the setup, and there's a very dry kind of wit that goes through all this - House's continuing musings were great. House being a) caught up in his own experiment and b) essentially 'got' by Wilson made this hilarious, sweet, clever and very hot.

fauxpocky August 28 2006, 08:15:35 UTC

Utterly gorgeous.

*blushes* Thank you!

there's a very dry kind of wit that goes through all this

I think dry and sarcastic is really the only way you can go with most of House's inner monologues. He's the type who probably even mocks himself when there's no one else around to pick on.