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Fic: The Real You (2/?)

Oct 23, 2010 05:36

Title: The Real You (2/?)
Author: Babette babettew54
Category: Smallville (AU)
Characters: Lois/Clark, Perry White
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2,000
Summary: What if Future!Clark had witnessed the kiss on the rooftop, what would be his reaction?
Spoilers: None.
A/N: Please try and remember, this is not the couple from last night, this is Future!Clois and ( Read more... )

fic: the real you

Comments 16

eternal_moonie October 23 2010, 10:18:03 UTC

AWESOME new chapter!

babettew54 October 23 2010, 10:36:42 UTC

Thanks, hon! I had to wonder if I had gone to far with Clark!!

Thanks, hon, for coming over to read and review!:D

lorelaisquared October 23 2010, 14:47:50 UTC

Oh dear. Hope they sort it out. Interested to see where you will take this...

babettew54 October 23 2010, 14:55:58 UTC

No marriage is perfect and Clark and Lois are no different. It will be a struggle, but they have a strong foundation.

Thanks for reading, update next week!:D

athenesolon October 23 2010, 15:12:52 UTC

*on the last part* Ouch! But very true at the same time.

babettew54 October 23 2010, 16:25:37 UTC

Oh, did I go too far? I thought long and hard about crushing the glasses, but I think I got my point across.

Thanks hon, for coming over to read and review! :D

paradisekendra October 24 2010, 03:46:25 UTC

As for never being big on his glasses in the first place, covering up his pretty face, I don't mind the crushing. In the SV universe, I think the disguise is kinda odd anyway. So it'll be interesting to see where you go with this.

babettew54 October 24 2010, 10:29:30 UTC

Well, the glasses are necessary, they've always been there, except in SV where he's not Superman yet, but why are they so big and bulky? I never understood that idea.

How they fix this will be a bit of a surprise, but also a bit drastic (Lois's idea). You'll see!

Thanks, hon! :D

repmetsyrrah October 25 2010, 10:54:41 UTC

Oh, just caught the future part of this ep. on YouTube so I decided to come read this. I love it! Clark jealous of himself? Lol! But you write it so well, it's completely understandable why he would be.

Lois’s mouth dropped open, but then she snapped it shut and then suddenly realized giddy females were still ‘eye humping’ her husband from the hallway.

ROFL!

Poor Clark though, can't wait for the next chapter!

babettew54 October 25 2010, 12:03:07 UTC

*Haha* That's my favorite line too!!

I loved the future part of 'Homecoming' too, but as soon as it was over and I had watched it a few times, my Muse would not leave me alone with all the what if's that crowded my brain and this story was the result!! :D

Thanks, hon for coming over to read and review! Update later this week!! :D