Comments | femslash06: Unique Forms of Continuity in Space (Firefly, River/Kaylee)

tremblingmoon in femslash06

Unique Forms of Continuity in Space (Firefly, River/Kaylee)

Apr 04, 2006 17:52

Late, yes, but with permission. In any case though, heartfelt apologies for making you wait.

Title: Unique Forms of Continuity in Space
Author: tremblingmoon
Recipient: puppetoflove
Fandom: Firefly
Pairing: River/Kaylee
Rating: PG
Words: 1328

( She’s not supposed to be there and she knows and she doesn’t care because Serenity speaks a language as large as she is. )

Comments 22

viciouswishes April 5 2006, 08:27:42 UTC

Excellent fic. Wonderful River and Kaylee. (And I swear that statue is haunting me ever since I missed it on my art history slide id last week.)

tremblingmoon April 5 2006, 20:39:40 UTC

Thank you!

[Futurism has always been my favorite art movement--not their misongyny/Fascism, but their art itself--so I still get a little excited when I meet anyone who's even remotely familiar with their work...even if you did miss Boccioni on the slide exam. ;) ]

alixtii April 5 2006, 12:23:55 UTC

This is quite wonderful. An excellent River voice, and a nice grasp of both River and Kaylee as you bring them together that doesn't feel forced or rushed at all, but just right.

tremblingmoon April 5 2006, 20:42:59 UTC

Thank you so much.

doesn't feel forced or rushed at all

That's exactly what I was hoping, so I'm so glad it worked for you!

qurinas May 16 2006, 03:15:06 UTC

This was a great read. I have to agree with everyone else that you really nailed River. Great job with the story. I really enjoyed reading it.

tremblingmoon June 8 2006, 19:03:33 UTC

Thanks so much! I really appreciate your comments.
(Sorry for the delay in my response...I was out of town for a while.)

summer_jackel August 21 2006, 22:20:26 UTC

oh, beautiful. I love the River voice and perceptions, and the slightly confused but still happy Kaylee. What a *neat* pairing, and you did a great job of it. Thank you.

tremblingmoon August 23 2006, 22:05:28 UTC

Thanks so much. I always appreciate such a lovely comment! ;)

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tremblingmoon August 23 2006, 22:08:57 UTC

LOL. Well, perhaps I was experiencing a bit of a cult-stud overload when I wrote this...it's hard not to get all sucked in once you start.

a pulsating nub of glow-in-the-dark Happy?
I guess I'll take that as a compliment. :) Thanks so much for your comment...it really made my day!