Comments | femslash06: Unique Forms of Continuity in Space (Firefly, River/Kaylee)

tremblingmoon in femslash06

Unique Forms of Continuity in Space (Firefly, River/Kaylee)

Apr 04, 2006 17:52

Late, yes, but with permission. In any case though, heartfelt apologies for making you wait.

Title: Unique Forms of Continuity in Space
Author: tremblingmoon
Recipient: puppetoflove
Fandom: Firefly
Pairing: River/Kaylee
Rating: PG
Words: 1328

( She’s not supposed to be there and she knows and she doesn’t care because Serenity speaks a language as large as she is. )

Comments 22

frogfrizz October 26 2006, 09:10:04 UTC

I can't believe I didn't comment the first time I read this. This was all kinds of beautiful and just so refreshing to read. The imagery really speaks and I just love what you do with the language. Precious last line: 'And River learns she can even hear starlight'. You've given River a voice and it's just wonderful!

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tremblingmoon December 28 2007, 08:11:58 UTC

Aww, thanks! The feeling is mutual, I'm sure. ;)
I do so love it when people stumble across old stories!

seelyfey August 23 2009, 08:27:56 UTC

These days, River is not a captive of her vision, of the sensory vehicle that is her body; rather, she is the variable in a masterful equation. Not a trite x or y, but n as it approaches infinity on the sharp wings of sigma, and her shifting magnitude sculpts the delicate equilibrium of its resolution.

This was probably my favorite part. The way math and poetry juxtapose so beautifully is undoubtedly River. You have a wonderful lyrical style and I hope to read more Serenity fics from you. I actually FELT it when reality snapped in and out of focus for River. It wasn't just about words, it was about sensation. Gorgeous. Thanks for sharing.

tremblingmoon September 12 2009, 01:06:12 UTC

Thank you so much for the amazing comment! What a blast from the past for me...going back to this story. I'm glad you like that line in particular; it may be one of my favorite lines from any story I've written.

I haven't written anything in a while, but I did write a few other Firefly/Serenity stories 'back in the day'. They're all archived under my name on P&P (http://www.ralst.com/storiesFF.html).

Thank you again.