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FIC: Slavery to a Pattern (4/7)

Jun 24, 2010 02:53

Title: SLAVERY TO A PATTERN
Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Quinn/Rachel, Brittany/Santana
Rating: Up to R
Spoilers: All of season 1
Warnings: Domestic Violence, Hurt/Comfort, Angst
Author's Note: Written for Glee Angst Meme, specifically the Angst section of the Rachel/Quinn Prompt Meme for the following prompt: "Rachel/Quinn - one or both of Quinn's parents are ( Read more... )

angst, glee femslash, hurt/comfort, rachel/quinn, brittany/santana

Comments 40

marshmallowhobo July 3 2010, 00:24:06 UTC

I'm finally making my way through the huge backlog of fic that has accumulated since I've been busy, and this was first on my list. Just read all three available parts and now I need more! Like, right now lol. This fic is awesome, you're awesome. Kudos on the detailing, just enough to make it heartbreaking, but not too much that it reduces me to an emo-level of depression lol. Job very well done, miss.

urban_folk_girl July 22 2010, 05:02:50 UTC

Oh, thanks all over the place. I really appreciate hearing your feedback on the angst - I went back and forth with how much was too much, how explicit was too explicit. I'm glad you felt like it toed the line without going over. That's what I was aiming for! I'm into the last section now - it was stubborn coming, and I hope to post it by the weekend. Thank you so much for taking the time to comment with your lovely sentiments, and for reading!

dreamupfalldown July 15 2010, 06:03:08 UTC

Goodness me, I thought that bastard Russell was going to choke Quinn with his belt too.

urban_folk_girl July 22 2010, 05:00:41 UTC

He's a rotten guy, for sure. I'm glad it was a suspenseful read. Thanks for reading, and for taking the time to comment!

goesinwaves July 20 2010, 00:59:50 UTC

what a powerful and moving story. i swear on my life i was shaking with anger and anticipation and what was gonna happen when he took quinn! and kick-down-doors!santana is just so awesome!

this whole thing is insanely good, and so well written! i cant wait for the next part :)

urban_folk_girl July 22 2010, 04:59:35 UTC

Oh, thanks thanks thanks. I'm so glad it was a powerful read for you, and I'm always really flattered to hear that people have strong emotions reading things I've written. That's a very high compliment, IMO. And, re: door-kicking Santana, I LOVE a good rescue, so I'm glad you liked it!

I'm working on the next part now, and hope to have it up this weekend.

Thanks for reading, and thanks for taking the time to comment!

winstonta March 13 2011, 23:52:08 UTC

Very powerful stuff. I'm grateful you're writing this so well. Some use abuse in fic as sensationalism, and you're addressing the issue so realistically, particularly from the point of view of the abused. Accepting the abuse and acknowledging that change needs to occur are very difficult concepts, and are completely different from actually beginning to seek help and get away from the abuse. Both of my parents were abused in their youth, and they each had a different response/way of moving away from it. *shakes head free of second-hand memories* Anyway, just had to give some feedback for this since you did such an excellent job writing about such a sensitive subject.

Now onto the next part. :)