Oil And Vinegar - for brigits_flame

[fenrischained]

Title: Oil & Vinegar
Genre: Romantic
Warnings: No.

Summary: Some people just clash. I always believed that.

A/N: This was written (hurriedly) for the Week 2 prompt at brigits_flame- 'Oil And Vinegar'. Yes, I'm just that unimaginative.
Anyway. Last-ditch attempt. Enjoy!

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Comments

[the_panic_light]

I love this. Quite simple, yet it says so much. Gives me hope, in a funny kind of way..

[fenrischained]

Thanks! Glad you like it. ^.~

[cedarwolfsinger]

Good work! I will have more to say later, as I am one of your editors this week. First read -- a strong piece and a great ending.

[ephemeralbreath]

That was so adorable!

I'm definitely a vinegar person too, then (I don't even know what a pashmina is)! Hahaha. I hope I can find my oil man someday.

[fenrischained]

XD Glad you like it!

A pashmina's a posh sort of shawl.

[amri]

Aww this was so sweet. I loved the descriptions of the oil man and the vinegar woman.

Good luck this week!

[fenrischained]

Thanks! ^^ I got through, so that's okay.

Editing

[cedarwolfsinger]

Hello, I am one of your editors for this week. You know I liked this because I told you so directly after I read it the first time. Please note - I go paragraph by paragraph because that makes sense to me. Also - all my “changes” are merely suggestions. Take from them whatever makes sense to you and disregard whatever does not suit you.

This is very good - short, sweet, with a bit of a surprise at the end. I only have picky corrections and few of those.

Paragraph 3: remove the comma after the word “but”.

Paragraph 6: I'd put a colon after “picky” and before “food”.

Again, I really like this story. Good work!

Re: Editing

[fenrischained]

Thanks! ^.~