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blacklabcoat August 29 2010, 13:20:38 UTC
If this was any sweeter it'd be sugar. But it's the good kind of sweet! :3 I'd really love to read some more David. NOTHING beats a 6 year old little version of Arthur.

(And I just LOVE the first scene. "I'm sorry. Is 'son' a euphemism for erection?" Perplexed Eames is perplexed and buying himself some time. Ha!)

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fermine August 30 2010, 15:37:23 UTC
Haha. I swear I thought you were trying to pick me up with that line. I promise to flesh out these characters in the future! I still have a couple other things I need to finish, gah, most of them curtain!fic which I suppose in a way is my niche O}:

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oh_so_blase August 29 2010, 13:26:43 UTC
Oh my heart! This is so lovely!
How is this so lovely?! Oh you, really really really great work you've done in this fic.

Also, Jersey love!

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fermine August 30 2010, 15:38:17 UTC
Are you from Jersey? dfjslkjf Everything I know I've learned through repeated viewings of Garden State, Google, and listening to Kevin Smith waxing poetry about it.

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oh_so_blase August 30 2010, 16:28:29 UTC
lol. yes, im from jersey.
i've never known anyone not from Jersey react like this. IT'S AMAZING!

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fermine August 30 2010, 16:29:38 UTC
react like what? lol. D: i mean, some of my favourite people are from there (kevin smith, zach braff, frank sinatra, and during some point in my adolescent life, that band from newark .__.)

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mmfail August 29 2010, 13:30:28 UTC
Arthur lacked interpersonal skills and when something went awry his first instinct was to maim, kill, or shoot.
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Oh oh oh love D:

She was not the type of person Eames imagined capable of raising a child who would later become wanted for felony in Central Asia.
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I love Arthur's mother. It'll probably be an unsuccessful courtship.

Eames was almost convinced for a moment Arthur had himself cloned in a fit of egocentricity,//Clone Arthur probably would've already kicked him in the foot.
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I'm stealing this kid, and no one can stop me. ;~;

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fermine August 30 2010, 15:38:40 UTC
That would be kidnapping D:

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mmfail August 30 2010, 18:16:25 UTC
Or like. Extended borrowing. >_>

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fermine August 30 2010, 18:20:46 UTC
Haha. I'm sure that'll be fine. :)

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OP here narcoticaddict August 29 2010, 13:36:24 UTC
feifjewfojefw that was so freaking adorable. <3333

I love the contrast between what Eames's last secret is and Arthur's last secret. It couldn't have been written better. 8D

I JUST WANT TO HUG DAVID, WHAT A QT.

And when Eames took him for pancakes, that accidentally my heart. <3

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS, I LOVED IT!

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Re: OP here fermine August 30 2010, 15:40:29 UTC
I'm glad you liked David, the secret, and Eames taking David out for pancakes! I was worried for a moment it was not going to be up to par. It was a great prompt and I had so much fun with it. ♥

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lovetoujours August 29 2010, 13:48:58 UTC
awwww so cute!

(and as someone who was raised in nj, thank you for not making us a terrible place. WE ARE AWESOME)

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fermine August 30 2010, 15:40:53 UTC
Everything I know I learned from Google and listening to Kevin Smith. I HOPE I DID IT JUSTICE!

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