The Adventure (Frank/Mikey, R)

Nov 30, 2006 21:50

The Adventure
(5289 words) // R
Frank Iero/Mikey Way

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lena_gealach November 30 2006, 21:31:17 UTC
Oooh look, I'm mentioned. GO ME.

Anyway, I already told you what I think about this :D I really liked Angry!Mikey, I think you did that very well. (but you already knew that, hm?) I like how it's written, different from what you did before, definitely different from the HP fic you used to write. I love Frank, and the way he thinks (reminds me a bit of me :P) and I love Gerard in this a lot. And I already told you, but I'll say it again, I like how you portrayed Alicia. And when Frank broke up with Jamia, the first time I read it you evoked tears, lol.

I really want cherries now, but it's not really the season, is it?

Lol @ your edit! We spotted a psych student with one a while back, hahaha. Anyway, yes.

You're silly and I love you. *blows kisses*

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fianna_fialena December 1 2006, 07:35:29 UTC
Mmmmcherries. Nooo, the season is, like, april?

YAYYOULIKEDIT :D

You're silly too and I LOVE YOU MORE HAH! :D *snugs*

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_acantha_ November 30 2006, 22:14:47 UTC
Okay. So you wanted to see what went on in my head while reading your story. Be careful what you wish for, lol.

My reactions basically while reading the story. Because you asked me to.

Oh, no, poor Jamia! You can't make them break up, Fia. That's just mean!

They broke up. Noooo! Mean. :(

Oh, great, there's it's Alicia. *sarcasm* Hihi, they're fighting.

No scratch that, it makes him screech to a fucking halt and flail like a goldfish stranded on sunny and warm Hawaiian beach.
Lmao, I just imagined a huge (whale size like) goldfish lying on the beach drinking out of a coco-nut. But that’s probably not what you were going for. XD

“You okay, man?”
Gerard was singing the last I’m Not Okay from the song right when I read that phrase. Talking about great timing. Go iTunes.

Mikey shakes his head. “Not this time, Frankie. I’ve… I’ve really messed up.” Awwwe. :(

Alicia at 6AM knocking on your door, pissed, oh goodie.

He briefly debates killing her and dumping the body.
I can help you hide the body...

“I… er…” Frank doesn’t know what ( ... )

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fianna_fialena December 1 2006, 07:30:52 UTC
Hi mikey! ^-^

Long comments are, like THE BEST KIND OMG! BFFL, RIMA! :p

Eeee ^-^ I'm so glad you *liked*it! ^-^ :D :D

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_acantha_ December 2 2006, 18:53:59 UTC
i'm in love.

especially with the "happy coming out day" card.

XD

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fianna_fialena December 1 2006, 07:32:54 UTC
Thanks! :D (I felt bad for Jamia writing it toooo. Alicia, not so much. XD)

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xxdance December 1 2006, 03:07:09 UTC
Wow!

That would be my initial reaction. Well, actually I guess "Man, I would never, ever want Alicia pissed off at me," was my initial reaction. She could totally kick my ass.

ANYHOW, I loved the voice. That was by far my favorite part of it--the fact that it had so much humor in the narration. Yes. Win.

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fianna_fialena December 1 2006, 07:33:56 UTC
eeeeee thanks. ^-^ Alicia could kick anyone's ass, I think. :p

YAY! :D :D :D

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elevendays December 1 2006, 23:32:58 UTC
This was AWESOME!
really really pretty.

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fianna_fialena December 2 2006, 10:53:23 UTC
Thanks! Icon ftw, yo! :D

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