The Adventure (Frank/Mikey, R)

Nov 30, 2006 21:50

The Adventure
(5289 words) // R
Frank Iero/Mikey Way

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robjlea December 1 2006, 23:58:43 UTC
I really liked how Gerard was the first person to acknowledge Frank's problem.

The part about the note in the jeans was a great bit.

The sexybit! worked for me.

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fianna_fialena December 2 2006, 10:54:28 UTC
Thanks! I glad you liked that part, cos, well, first time and stuff. :D

*g* Hi, Jeph! :D

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fianna_fialena December 2 2006, 10:57:10 UTC
*g* Actually this was my first foray into writing something in which no one dies. :p When I sent this to a friend to beta, he was all "wait, but. No one DIES?! :o" so yeah. XD I'm expanding my horizons a bit, I wanted to see if I could write happy!fic, and I'm glad I managed, really. :D

I've been reading a lot of cheery fic lately, and it rubbed off I suppose. :) Thanks so much! :D ♥

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chaosy June 19 2007, 00:38:11 UTC
I love the icon.

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fianna_fialena December 2 2006, 11:01:10 UTC
Yay long review! :D

And yeah, I get so sick of people just turning their girlfriend into bitches to get rid of them too. I mean, sure, I'd rather have Frank engaged to me rather than Jamia, but fics in which you can so clearly see that the author is writing his-/herself in the spot of whomever replaces the girlfriend, ugh. They make me vomit, honest.

Actually, you're not the first one to say that about that phrase, I dislike it myself, but I had no idea what else to put there. I asked around, really, but *shrug* If you've any suggestions, please, I'd gladly change it. :D

Thaaaanks! ♥ :D

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bythelastlight December 2 2006, 01:04:20 UTC
I just have to say this was absolutely amazing. It made me smile alot. I loved it!

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fianna_fialena December 2 2006, 11:03:03 UTC
Thaaaanks. :D I'm really glad you liked it. :D

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cloudy_tears December 2 2006, 03:19:26 UTC
OH WOW! By the end of that I had uber warm fuzzies and I was cheering them on. I LOVED IT! And I found the frequent goldfish references amusing ;P

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fianna_fialena December 2 2006, 11:03:47 UTC
Eee fuzzies! :D I'm glad I could provide some amusement. :D Thanks! ♥

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