Comments | fianna_fialena: they lied when they said the good die young (Patrick/Pete, PG)

fianna_fialena

they lied when they said the good die young (Patrick/Pete, PG)

Apr 18, 2007 10:36

They lied when they said the good die young (Fall Out Boy gen)
(1210 words) // PG
for January 23rd.
Soundtracked by Anberlin’s Alexithymia. I strongly recommend you put it on, because the effect won’t be as good if you don’t. (Plus it’s an awesome song.)

This fic has been moved! You can now find it here.

♥

fall out boy, pete/patrick, rps, fic

Comments 65

candescentlines April 20 2007, 10:24:00 UTC

That was awful. God. Just. Argh. It was so awful T_T.

I loved it. Great job =]. Thanks for sharing with us.

fianna_fialena April 20 2007, 11:16:03 UTC

I'm a little amused by the "That was awful! I loved it." But yes, I get what you mean. DAMN YOU, PETE WENTZ!

Thanks to you! For reviewing! :D <3

foxtrot_pasta April 20 2007, 14:56:08 UTC

Hey, this is still fab :D I just wanted to tell you that, and I can honestly not remember what I said when you first sent it to me, but it's really cool, and especially with the snapping where you'd expect more guilt later, and when it doesn't really come, I think you achieve exactly the kind of suspense we were talking about :) Great job!

fianna_fialena April 20 2007, 15:00:42 UTC

^-^

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fianna_fialena April 22 2007, 09:34:12 UTC

Awwww! *hugs* Thank you for your comment!

notyourfriend April 22 2007, 13:15:11 UTC

Oh, Patrick.

You did well at keeping that all flowing without becoming repetitive. I really liked the way it all tied back to that one night. I can see this characterisation so clearly but hope so much it's not true. No matter how much of an arsehole he can be, I need to believe that Patrick means the world to him.

fianna_fialena April 22 2007, 16:19:08 UTC

Oh Patrick, indeed. :(

Yes! I feel the same way! I know he's a prick sometimes, but, y'know, I REALLY don't think it's like this. :/

<3333

insunshine May 16 2007, 20:57:46 UTC

Oh, holy Christ.

I'm a crying mess.

Oh my god.

I am literally sitting here, listening to the Academy and crying my eyes out.

Oh my god.

This killed me.

God, the last line, and Patrick missing him, and the coffee cups and the newspaper messages...

Jesus, I wish I could write like this.

Man.

Want to be friends?

fianna_fialena May 16 2007, 21:04:10 UTC

Man! Man! I've read your stuff! You're an awesome writer, so em. Yeah. :D :D This is, like, HIGH PRAISE! :D

Also! The first things I see when I visit your journal are picspams! Which I collect for my Compilation List! :D :D

*friendz!* :D