At Gunpoint 7/10

[x_saru_x]

Title: At Gunpoint 7/10
Pairing: Jonghyun/Key
Genre: AU
Rating: NC-17 for this chapter
Summary: Jonghyun's eyes travel down to the corner the fifteen-inch screen, sweat rolling down his forehead; it's almost midnight.

Comments

[lovebyelove]

SPOTTT!! AND ITS YOUR BIRTHDAY?

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!
I'll comeback with a coherent response to this chapter, after I read it of course. :)

[lovebyelove]

I said I'll come back with a coherent response but I don't think I can. THIS IS AN AMAZING CHAPTER!~ Not because of the sex, it's that they build a connection mentally and emotionally. I don't know what I'm writing right now but I really like this chapter, maybe even more then the other one about Kibum's insights

[x_saru_x]

Allow me to sigh the longest sigh that ever was sighed, lmao.

No, seriously, I loved this chapter as much as I angsted over it. I was planning on describing a completely different Jonghyun, and once Kibum was brought into this chapter everything just changed. All it literally took was a simple sentence I wasn't expecting to write and this whole thing just wrote itself. Even I have grown a different, much deeper opinion on Jonghyun, if that's possible. What's probably to blame is that I had been thinking about this chapter ever since the first one, and Jonghyun hadn't really grown on me back then, not this much. But yes, babbling. *stops*

I'm really, really glad it turned out this strong, then!

Thank you so much! ♥

[queen_anything]

First, happy birthday! :D

I don't really have words right now to describe how I feel about this. My feelings are definitely positive ones, don't get me wrong, I just can't put them into words. xD Idk, I guess I feel like a lot more happened between Jonghyun and Key than just sex. I love how you wrote it out, so that it's not all about the smut.

I will wait patiently for more! <3

[x_saru_x]

Haha it's cool :3
Something more definitely happened, and I'm glad it was apparent! The thing is what happens next, yeah? /grin

Thank you~ ♥

[pilipinagrl]

i.. um, i love you!
that was just purely amazing and that was some good smut *.*
and whatever your Jonghyun is doing, keep doing it because i loved his perspective in this.
guh, it was great XD

and
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!

[x_saru_x]

D'aw I love you too lol.

Oh, my Jonghyun sure got the hang of making me write whatever he wants, all right. I doubt he's going to stop now, try as I may XD

I'm really glad you liked it!
Thank you ♥

[x_saru_x]

I'm surry D: *fixes*

Ugh, they are, aren't they? My poor babies :C
I actually think Jonghyun hadn't ever seriously considered getting this close to anyone/getting a partner, so he didn't even really realise he's alone. Now, though *winces* Hope he'll come around u_u

Thank you~ D'aw, I'll be patiently waiting, despite the faily internet connection I have in this God-forasken place ;o;

[mei_zi]

LOL, I took one look at the rating and fell in love. This was definitely worth the wait, and it was an epic win, bb. you never fail to deliver ♥

I guess being with Key for awhile was sort of like a wake-up call for Jonghyun, so hopefully they'll work things out soon? *_*

Btw, happy birthday! (: ♥

[x_saru_x]

LOL about time, wasn't it?

Oh, it sure shook him up quite a bit. What's important rn is that he thinks about it u_u *counts on him* lol

Thank you! ♥