At Gunpoint 7/10

[x_saru_x]

Title: At Gunpoint 7/10
Pairing: Jonghyun/Key
Genre: AU
Rating: NC-17 for this chapter
Summary: Jonghyun's eyes travel down to the corner the fifteen-inch screen, sweat rolling down his forehead; it's almost midnight.

Comments

[momochan1243]

So like, LJ told me it was your birthday, so, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! ♥ /happy faces, cakes, and all that good shit XD

andd....i felt like there was a need for this chapter. cuz jonghyun had to crack eventually (its kibum, cmon) and theyre both so alike yet so totally different, and i feel like this twisted connection is something only they would be able to pull off (correction, need to pull off).and sex is an AWESOME way to do that, cant wait for the next ♥

[x_saru_x]

yesyes it had to happen at some point, didn't it? There's strong codependence yet so much doubt at the same time. Sex, while not being the most important thing in this case, definitely drew Key's, but mostly Jonghyun's attention to that.

Thank you, thank you! ♥

[honeychann]

*O* Beautiful chapter is beautiful. ;o;
I have loved all the chapters so far, but I actually think this is my favorite one. It wasn't just all hot-speed-sex, it really had a depth to it. Key feels a need to be close to Jonghyun- to eliminate the loneliness in his life. Jonghyun needs substance. He's never gotten close with anyone, and I think that's starting to take some sort of toll on him. I think Jonghyun in this is just perfect. At first I thought he just was cold-blooded, but he's really so much deeper than that. He just doesn't like to admit it on the surface. You could really feel his resistance in this, but after awhile, being with Key, he starts to kinda break realizing he maybe he wants a bit more than he has in his life. And omg, the ending killed me! ;__;

Eeek, long-ass comment is TOO LONG! *runs*

OH! &
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3 *throws confetti* ♥

[x_saru_x]

Jonghyun's pretty confident in his ability to stand on his own as long as he doesn't let himself think about loneliness. While being caught up in his job, the further his mind can go about relationships is how easily they break down. Just this one night with Kibum, though, I believe it did much more than just offer him release of physical frustration. It really stirred him up, unexpectedly so. *sighs* Let's see where this takes him.

*showered in confetti* Thank you!! ♥

[faded_citylites]

shit girl. this part needs to be longer @-@
i love jongkey's relationship. like. it's interesting, really.
and this chap especially. ugh. i cannot get enough of this.

anyways. i so hear it's your bday? lol. well, if i'm not way too late.
happy birthday ~ have a good one (:
♥

[x_saru_x]

Oh God, how much longer? ngl, I was surprised by being able to write this much non-stop. Gave me a work-out, lol.
Really glad you like it! These two have grown on me so much, I'm going to miss them when this is over .__.

Nope, not late at all!
Thank you~ ♥

[faded_citylites]

lol. i know a way a great way to prevent that.
just never stop writing them :'D (lmao. doing this for my own selfish desires? no ! of course not.)
win-win, right? we, your readers, get more of this awesome fic & you won't ever have to miss this jongkey ! (:

[x_saru_x]

LOL tempting, but I doubt it XD
All things must end at some point, otherwise they tend to fade away, no?
although to be honest I wouldn't turn down a timestamp!oneshot idea in the future, if that makes it any better :3

[honeyflavor]

You know I don't read nc-17 jongkey. You know I don't. But this was beautiful. And heartbreaking. :C

I really don't know what else to say, my thoughts are pretty jumbled up right now, but I loved it. ♥

you can add another lame comment from me on your list nao.

[x_saru_x]

You don't read tons of stuff you should be reading, actually. :| but 'sokay *accepts you* lol

I'm relieved you'd say that, bb ;; Seriously it means a lot /nod
Thank you ♥

excuse you, you mean "another vip comment" u_u

[x_saru_x]

Hey! I'm very flattered you'd say all that! :3
I'm really glad this chapter seems to have that quiet aura. Originally, I wasn't even going for that, but it just flew so easily, I found myself kind of annoyed at the turn of events lol. I was like "But- but where will this scene I had thought of fit in, now? :|". Guess it was for the better XD

Oh, sure, I could do that! :3

The next update will be this Friday. All chapters so far have been posted every Friday night, and I'll keep it like that unless stated otherwise, for whatever reason :]
Thank you so much for reading and dropping a comment! ♥