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At Gunpoint 7/10

Jul 24, 2010 00:19

Title: At Gunpoint 7/10
Pairing: Jonghyun/Key
Genre: AU
Rating: NC-17 for this chapter
Summary: Jonghyun's eyes travel down to the corner the fifteen-inch screen, sweat rolling down his forehead; it's almost midnight.
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!chaptered, f: shinee, p: jonghyun/key

Comments 28

watashi_sama July 27 2010, 21:37:35 UTC

Hello,
I just spent most of my Tuesday reading your JongKey masterpieces and have had my breath taken away by your talent in writing this couple countless times already.
This is wonderful and I love it and if I had the words to describe it I would, but, even now, I still don't feel that any words can do it justice. In essence: take my admiration and probably incoherent rambling as my compliments and encouragement. :D
I look forward to another chapter!

x_saru_x July 27 2010, 22:19:36 UTC

Oh, uh, wow. This made me grin so much my cheeks almost hurt. Such a huge compliment, really. Terribly flattered, I can't even find something to say without sounding lame lol ;;

Thank you so, so much for taking the time to read all this and leave such a comment ♥

tsunagatte July 29 2010, 01:20:20 UTC

This is just what I needed after failing my physics exam ♥
And happy belated birthdayy! Hope you had a good one (:

x_saru_x July 29 2010, 10:39:45 UTC

Aww, sorry to hear that :C But I'm glad it at least made you feel a bit better ♥

Thank you~ :3

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x_saru_x August 7 2010, 20:40:28 UTC

Aww, thank you so much for that, flattered ;;

And don't be like that! I'm obviously not perfect or anything, and neither is anyone else. No need to be sad/jealous; just try to improve. Aren't we all, anyway? :3

hollande_emily June 20 2011, 04:31:36 UTC

i wasn't going to comment until i had read the whole series,
and it isn't because this is rated m,
this whole story has been wonderful, and this chapter left me literally breathless. your imagery is so precise and intimate without being vulgar, which is a very difficult balance to achieve. the physical intimacy is paired and exceeded by the emotional intimacy perfectly. the end of the scene left me heartbroken. i just can't even describe how impressed i am with your skill in writing.

x_saru_x June 20 2011, 18:54:01 UTC

This comment makes me so, so happy, for real!

This chapter was so important to me, and I was so unsure about it because I was planning on writing it differently. It started writing itself and that surprised me, but it feels so great, seeing that people actually enjoy it :3

Thank you so much for your words and taking the time to comment!