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At Gunpoint 10/10

Aug 14, 2010 00:11

Title: At Gunpoint 10/10
Pairing: Jonghyun/Key
Genre: AU
Rating: PG for this chapter
Summary: Kibum practically barricades himself in his room for the whole day. He doesn't directly get news on what happened, but he knows - he can tell by the way the sirens sound and how his hands shake.
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!chaptered, f: shinee, p: jonghyun/key

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x_saru_x August 14 2010, 17:23:40 UTC

orz you know how hard my internet connection life has been on me lately ;;

But eeek, glad you'd say that! ;; It couldn't have ended any other way, obviously. But seriously, that move on Park's part was unacceptable, how could he. smh. IT'S NOT MY FAULT HE SIDED WITH THE BAD GUYS, OKAY

Noooo, your wisdom was substantial to this fic u_u *grabs cookies and runs away* ♥

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x_saru_x August 14 2010, 17:27:35 UTC

IKR, IT'S ACTUALLY OVER ;; (cue realisation of how empty her life is, once again)
But it was extra nice while it lasted, for me at least :3

I'm really glad you enjoyed it~
Thank you for reading ♥

babymiiinsangel August 13 2010, 21:26:00 UTC

SPOT! third?

babymiiinsangel August 15 2010, 03:04:37 UTC

i know i'm so late...i had a migraine last night that's why i wasn't able to read

but anyways~ i'm so happy and contented with the ending~ i was like holding my breath for sometime you know? keke...i so love this!!! especially this part!!!

That's when he feels Kibum touch him for the first time. It's barely a tug, two hands clutching the front of his motorbike jacket, recently acquired from Jinki, and then it evolves into so much more; a yank on his chest, fingers digging into his back, a leg in between his, a face hiding into his neck, a scent he only smelled a few nights before. He's squeezed, as if to confirm he's really there ( ... )

r_hr_maniac August 13 2010, 21:34:20 UTC

Oh gosh I loved this so much. I'm not one for critique and I hadn't been exactly coherent even before I finished this, so I'll shut up and say that I. Loved. This. A lot. ♥

x_saru_x August 14 2010, 17:29:45 UTC

I'm really happy you enjoyed it this much ♥
Thank you for reading! :3

queen_anything August 13 2010, 21:40:41 UTC

I'm going to ruin the chain of spots & just comment ~ ! ^o^

This was all I was expecting and so much more! Really, I love the unique plot twist at the end - caught me totally off guard. & then Kibum and Jonghyun finally getting together? /wipes away tear This is all too perfect & good for words. <3

Thank you so much for writing this! :3

x_saru_x August 14 2010, 17:34:45 UTC

Really glad the plot twists were actually effective! lol
And meh could I ever leave them separate and in agony? There's a chance it would hurt me more than them lmao

Thank you for being around ♥