FIC FOR MANGAMISTREZZ

Mar 23, 2014 08:30

For: mangamistrezz
From: sashjun

Title: Mint Green
Pairings/Characters: Kame/Nakamaru
Rating: R
Warnings: bj, mpreg
Notes: Dear mangamistrezz, I felt like you really wanted mpreg, so I tried to deliver. I hope you like it. There are parts that are definitely dear to my heart, and I hope you can find some for you as well. Thanks to my beta for all her love, support and help. 8763 ( Read more... )

p: kame/nakamaru, rated: r, year: 2014, ! fic

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mangamistrezz March 24 2014, 03:02:50 UTC
Awwwww....I wanted to be the first one to comment on this story, but I'll let it go this time- this fic is just too awesome to NOT comment on! (*≧▽≦)ノシ))

YAY! THIS FIC IS MINE!!! Super happy~ There really are SO many epic things that happened in this fic, so I'll just start from the beginning...

I just woke up and as soon as I found out my gift-fic was posted, I decided to postpone breakfast and just read my fic. But don't worry- after I finished, I ate breakfast and took a shower before leaving my review d(-_^)

From the header itself, I started smiling and giggling already. You're right- I REALLY wanted a mpreg, but I didn't think anyone would actually write it for me. So I was VERY pleasantly surprised that you wrote what I wanted. Thank you so much for that! Now for some scenes that I enjoyed:

He slaps himself tentatively to make sure it wasn’t just a surreal dream. Junno smiles at him, and slaps his other cheek. “To make the blush even,” he reasons. Ueda can’t help but guffaw. Nakamaru adds more vegetables to Kame’s plate and ( ... )

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mayezinha March 24 2014, 04:50:25 UTC
OMG this fic.
Because the world needs Daddy!Nakamaru.
All this seeting, Kame's feelings, Ueda being such a sneaky enabler (though I suspect only for his own amusement) and loved his adoration for the baby (he won the name pool after all!) and insufferable Junno (I still love you)
Loved the dynamics of the group and just how this pair got together, despite the angsty bit.
Thanks a lot for sharing, I finished reading and wanted to read it all over again!!

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dori_liv March 24 2014, 23:39:27 UTC
Such a great fic. I don't often read mpreg but this doesn't even feel like mpreg. The way it mixes in with Kame's life and the relationship between him and Maru makes it all feel like just another element of the story. I love how the journey of the pregnancy is told so well without overdoing it at all.
The evolution of the Kame/Maru realtionship is brilliant too. And I love all the KAT-TUN interaction and the different ways everyone supported and reacted to the pregnancy.
Just perfect.

Kame squishes his baby girl between them and hopes she understands whose heartbeat she can feel as he presses so close. ♥

And for the first time ever I feel like I might know who you are but I might be completely wrong.

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scorch66 March 25 2014, 04:41:36 UTC
Wow, anon, where to begin. *breathes*

Okay so I never really read mpreg but this was nakame mpreg and I love nakame and I was curious as to how you would spin it and so I clicked and read and was completely blown away. Absolutely zero regrets. Right from the start I was charmed by your humour and KAT-TUN's dynamics and then somehow, in this sneaky TOTALLY UNEXPECTED WAY, you attacked me with feels. Like wibbly, weepy, oh my heart feels. Allow me to quote and lose my commenting composure:

Junno smiles at him, and slaps his other cheek.
fhdsjk LAUGHED IN REAL LIFE. I love how easy-going Junno is through the entire fic ♥

Ueda draws his chair closer, like it’s a show, and Junno slinks an arm around Kame curiously.
This is exactly how I see them. A+++ dynamics.

“My child will have my nose,” Kame says decidedly.
“Because that’s so much better,” Ueda laughs.
again, I laugh out loud. I REALLY THOUGHT THIS WAS GOING TO BE CRACK AT THIS POINT little did I know...

And who is he kidding? He is a pregnant man. How is that attractive?see like ( ... )

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scorch66 March 25 2014, 04:41:47 UTC
“Hi baby,” he mutters.
gurgle-y laugh irl. I appreciate how you keep throwing in this humorous gems because for 1) you made me laugh, and 2) they let me recover somewhat from all the PUNCHES TO THE FEELS.

“Don’t tell Ueda I gave it away, but he’s been composing a lullaby for you,”
/helpless noise. the perfection of this fic will never cease, will it? T__T

drops him home only when Kame tries to use his belly to squash him against the closest shop window
genius anon, ilu ♥♥♥♥

Kame squishes his baby girl between them and hopes she understands whose heartbeat she can feel as he presses so close.so beautiful and poignant, I really can't. srsly. I had to lean back and breathe for a moment before I could return to reading. this has happened to me so many times while reading, anon ( ... )

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je_levy March 28 2014, 21:38:06 UTC
I have probably read this fic close to about 15 times and I never seem to get tired of reliving the journey of it. It gives me so many baby feels each time and really, i have to compliment the way you manage to make me actually relate to Kame as a pregnant person and someone who hasn't got time to risk his heart in a relationship that might not happen officially in any case; that the pregnancy isn't so much a result of a relationship but something intimate and personal; a true life decision. I really used to not care either way for reading about pregnancy in any capacity but this sort of gender-inclusive approach, that Kame's experience could just as easily happen to a woman; that's what has me so enamored with your premise and execution.

I really love this fic. so so much <3<3

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