Start to Finish: Chapter 4: Hotchner Family

Mar 12, 2011 07:11

Title: Start to Finish
Author: ficdirectory
Characters: Hotchner Family
Word Count: 23,799 - Chapter 4/10
Warnings/Spoilers/Rating: Character Death, Loss of a Loved One, Violence, Post-Traumatic Stress/Seasons 1-6/FRT.
Summary: Hotch's time in the BAU and with his family.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the CBS-owned characters mentioned. Not written for ( Read more... )

jack, warning: character death, warning: violence, author: ficdirectory, warning: post-traumatic stress, criminal minds, warning: loss of a loved one, title: start to finish, hotch, rating: pg-13, words: 10000-29999

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lovechilde March 12 2011, 15:52:41 UTC
Beautiful.

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ficdirectory March 12 2011, 17:15:32 UTC
Thanks so much!

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nannerz2cool March 12 2011, 21:10:40 UTC
Lovely. The tea part is my favorite. Kind of wish it had ended with that.

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ficdirectory March 12 2011, 22:04:18 UTC
Yaaay! And so funny that your favorite part is still the tea part, LOL. Technically, I can move things around, too...so...

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kuriadalmatia March 12 2011, 23:45:49 UTC
Stunning and lovely. I enjoyed these as the individual drabbles, but collected together...amazing!

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ficdirectory March 13 2011, 00:02:06 UTC
Thank you so much!

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ext_434524 March 13 2011, 00:08:55 UTC
*sniffles*

It's the bit at the end that really got me.

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ficdirectory March 13 2011, 01:49:27 UTC
Aw! Thank you for reading!

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yaba324 March 14 2011, 01:03:22 UTC
God, this was kind of gut-wrenchingly beautiful. I loved it so much. I read it in two seatings but the flow remained throughout and I loved how smoothly you transitioned between Hotch's, Jack's, and earlier Haley's POV. I really enjoyed it. I'm so glad you're focusing on all the characters. It's time someone does the justice :).

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ficdirectory March 14 2011, 02:20:22 UTC
It's probably wrong how much I enjoy your comments :) Seriously. They are making my day. I'm really glad the flow remained intact even reading this over two occasions. Glad everyone came across realistically and that you feel I am doing them justice. That's what I'd hoped.

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