Secret Whispers ~ Chapter Fifteen | part three

[fighter_of_moon]

PART TWO

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[gemplee]

I will be honest here and say that I cannot bring myself to like Kazu's character here. He is so stubborn and he never really believed in Jin's depth of feelings for him. Would their relationship had lasted if they had been together, if whatever caused him to leave Jin hadn't happened? Would it have been strong enough to withstand the long distance?

I feel really sorry for Jin who has been doing the chasing for so long and I feel tired on his behalf seeing him do it all over again. It is so unfair that he doesn't even know what he had done so wrong to be punished like that.

Even Yuuya had more faith in Jin than Kazu so much so that with his last breath he asked Kazu to find out the truth from Jin and yet Kazu didn't see fit to honour his brother's dying wish.

I wish to see at some point Kazu having to do the chasing instead of Jin. I hope Kazu gets to experience all that Jin feels, the hurt when the one you love pushes you away everytime.

I also don't understand yamapi. Sure he is best friends with both Jin and Ryo but why hasn't he

[aroruae]

About Yamapi. It's just that he haven't written those scenes, but he have said a few times that he had talked with Ryo and it had had the same ending as it did with Jin - Ryo had refused to say or believe anything. Yamapi knows his two best friends and he knows that nothing will change their minds at this point - they have to figure it themselves. Besides, he trusts Jin and he knows that he'll eventually get to Ryo and Kazuya XDD

And Ryo. He also has a story that we hadn't talked about much unfortunately *sigh* His actions will be understood later, but while it's true that he had believed in Kazuya more than his own best friend, he had had his reasons too. And, well, he had only thought that this fight won't last for long. I'll explain more after chapter 17 when we reveal what had really happened three years ago :P

Don't be sorry XDD Now that you've said it, I realized that we haven't explained Ryo that much and that maybe we should try and add something to the story. So if you have other opinions, please do share ^^

The part about

[fighter_of_moon]

I will be honest here and say that I cannot bring myself to like Kazu's character here. He is so stubborn and he never really believed in Jin's depth of feelings for him. Would their relationship had lasted if they had been together, if whatever caused him to leave Jin hadn't happened? Would it have been strong enough to withstand the long distance?You won't like much later either, unfortunately. But reasons he has for behaving this way. And let me ask you something - you meet a girl and she falls in love with you, then forces upon you some kisses, you enjoy them, go on with the flow and without noticing both of you are in love and ready to spring in a new relationship. A few months pass and you went from straight to gay in such a short time and while you not doubt yourself and your new found orientation, how do you feel about your partner who has been as straight as you have? In love, there will always be doubts especially in such type of relationships, when you give all of yourself and in the end... something comes along the way and

[fighter_of_moon]

Oh, I forgot to answer your questions >////< silly me ^^;

They wouldn't have lasted, but if there was will from both sides they would have ended up together in one country one way or another :P And seeing as Jin was the clingy one, probably Kazuya would have been kidnapped to America LOL

I think they would have made it one way or another, as long as they were to see each other :"3 You know, far from eyes, far from heart :))

[shinae183]

the angst and drama just killed me, well literary. Just how complicated its gonna get, I meant for Kame to be stubborn about this whole matter.. and I pity Jin, almkst cried because I felt his pain.. Baka Kame~ T-T

[fighter_of_moon]

T_____T
I understand, I felt his pain too ;o;
And things will get complicated because Kazuya is like this and Jin isn't far from him... so, expect more angst and drama >o<'

Thanks for commenting~ *hugs*

[shinae183]

I really wish for Jin to think about the consequences before taking his plan into action... This is seriously the most complicated triangle love story I've read so far. Ryo's action reminds me of Last Friends, though I hope it wont be that way *fingers crossed*

I really wish Jin would become like the other Jin in AO, not a fool in love... but I still feel sad for him. This story is really amazing *hugs*

[fighter_of_moon]

You'll be hearing soon enough ^^ but I can't guarantee you're going to like them XDD

But yeah, Jin, hang on!

Thanks for reading and commenting *hugs*

[pinkporca]

I was going to ask what happened three years ago, because I could not figure it out. But after reading your comments I realize I did not miss anything. Good. I thought I would have to re read the story to figure it out (which I would not mind as I really like this story a lot). Good job with it. I really feel for Jin and Ryo. Someone will get hurt. Thank you for the quick update.

[fighter_of_moon]

Someone will get hurt.

Oh, you just have no idea how much truth you just wrote lol

And what happened 3 years ago will be revealed in two chapters from here, just a little more haha

Also, we're updating quicker than usually because we really want to have the stories all finished as we have others on-hold and they're finished as well~ well, almost lol so... we're quite anxious to hear some opinions on the other stuff lol Tho it won't be this angsty as this or as mad as AO lol

Thanks for reading & commenting *hugs*

[lynnkat_tun]

them jin is getting hurt with kazu behaviour! i hope he cab stand it till the end! please make akame moment soon! miss them here~
i wonder what happen? why kazu like that?

hmm..thank for sharing and update~

[fighter_of_moon]

Kazuya's reason will be revealed in the following chapters, after all, he's cracking under Jin's insistence~

And there will be AKame moments, but still angst will present as well unfortunately ;(

Thanks for reading & commenting *hugs*