Yet another piece of my unfinished story....

[fightfire]

Joseph stroked his beloved’s hair softly. He didn’t look up when he heard footsteps in the corridor behind him. “Smile. Dammit. Smile.” He sobbed. “Oh but I would die to see you smile….” The voice spoke from behind him in an amused tone. “Now Joseph,” the man said mockingly into the night. “you know that isn’t possible anymore.” Joseph

Comments

[punkyswede15]

Your story is good. And what you said at the end about forgiveness, really deep. You should be a writer, I wish I could write like that.

[fightfire]

Thanks Ari, thats very kind of you. I love compliments!

[punkyswede15]

I'm starting to write a book/story called "Snow Angel". It's about this girl who can control the weather and people's body temperatures with her mind. Craziness! <3 Ary

Damn it all to Hell!

[fightfire]

I spelled Ary wrong! The only other time I have ever seen it written it was written with an "i" so now I feel dumb. *sticks out tongue* you win!

[cute_asa_butt0n]

My house Saturday. Be there or be square!

[fightfire]

Does it start at a particular time?
Or do I just randomly show up?

[cute_asa_butt0n]

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