Broken Boys: the new ending

[fightinghand]

This is the new ending for Broken Boys, which leads into Pride of the Peacock.

Ten, Jack, Rose. PG for violence.

Comments

[emiloy]

"The Doctor hears the clank of a chain"
*shudders* ooh that's good! great of you to rewrite the ending ^^ works well!
must be hard for Jack, losing the doctor again...
like usuall, can't wait for more ;)