Fic: Mezzanine: The Might of thy Breath 2/2

[filenotch]

Comments

[synecdochic]

I still love this with the burning fire of a thousand suns. ♥

[filenotch]

Cool. Thanks for the opportunity to play in the sandbox.

[droolfangrrl]

So darn good! But your stuff always is. And it's the little things, like you know more than one freaking word for penis.

And I knew that Sunny and Robert would get together! \o/

[filenotch]

You can blame ivorygates for that. She saw it coming, and I was as clueless as usual. As was Robert.

And thanks.

[gigerisgod]

Reading this was pure pleasure.

Ah, the ending, so awesome.

[filenotch]

Thanks. I owe comments from others for shaping the ending. Also, like most men, they are twelve.

[j00j]

This was awesome!

[filenotch]

Glad you liked it.

[filenotch]

Thanks for all you did on it. You picked up on things in the original, sucky version that really paid off when they got proper attention.

And Flaming Ruin Cocktails is going to enter my vocabulary. It's going to come in handy.

[synecdochic]

Never trust any drink that turns a different color after the last ingredient has been added.