i agree to the nth degree with all of the complimenting already done. i would write more, but i'm going to be late for work for reading this in the first place. it was just so delightfully wonderful that i couldn't stop, though. i loved imagining the delivery of cameron's 'i'm not pressuring you' line. it'll probably make me smile all day. this was beautifully written. lyrical, almost. i cannot compliment that aspect enough. it had gentle rises and falls (at least in the way my mind reads). excellent.
The "bargaining with butter" line made me LOL. That was great! And Cam trying to get Sarah to go to the prom with her. That was sweet.
Usually, I'll skip over the lyrics in something like this because they don't always seem to fit the story very well, but you made them fit perfectly so they were integral to the story.
Excellent job! I would love to see more like this.
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However, I do want to tell you how amazing your choices were, and I loved the little ficlets that went with each one. Just beautiful.
(Oh, and you used John Barrowman on a mix, for which I shall eternally love you.)
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Yay, eternal love. The best kind.
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Usually, I'll skip over the lyrics in something like this because they don't always seem to fit the story very well, but you made them fit perfectly so they were integral to the story.
Excellent job! I would love to see more like this.
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I don't have to win Skynet though, do I?
Thank you!
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