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I Will Follow You Into The Dark - Chapter One

Aug 02, 2009 16:52

Fic Title: I Will Follow You Into The Dark
Chapter: 1/7
Fandom: Torchwood
Author: finksgirl
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Disclaimer: I sadly do not own Torchwood. If I did I wouldn't need to write this fic in the first place. The title is from the Death Cab For Cutie song of the same name.
Summary: Captain Jack Harkness has lost everything. Now it's ( Read more... )

jack/ianto, torchwood, i will follow you into the dark

Comments 30

axeslade August 2 2009, 23:14:14 UTC

Oh my *hugs Jack* I particularly loved the part about his daughter, that was just too perfect. And this line...That man will never be past tense. Just wonderful. Can't wait for the rest!

finksgirl August 2 2009, 23:16:33 UTC

Thank you!
I was thinking of what to possibly add and I figured Alice deserved a bit of a backstory.

chaos_vaan August 3 2009, 00:44:48 UTC

Unf, beautifully writtin. Currently, I am tracking this like the shit. Plus, I liked how you added Alice and Stephen to the mix. I thought that Davies didn't really provide closure for those two characters; the needed it the most as well. Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapters - Keeping an eye out :DDD

finksgirl August 3 2009, 00:47:27 UTC

thank you =]
It would be wrong I think to not mention them really...
more soon. I plan on posting chapter two before my trip.

rbekkah August 3 2009, 02:08:59 UTC

Great start! You've set the mood of a broken sorrowful soul very well! Can't wait to see what you have planned

tonjavmoore August 3 2009, 04:33:41 UTC

You go, Jack! You can only break him so far, before he snaps back. Great start and I'm looking forward to more.

finksgirl August 3 2009, 05:37:05 UTC

thanks, I miss Jack fighting back. And Ianto asked him to fight back so he shall... (I dont like that he gave up basically in Day Five, it's always bothered me)

cool_tre_cool August 3 2009, 05:24:56 UTC

Oooh, there is so much potential here! Great start!

(And great layout, btw. I heart Billie/Mike!)

finksgirl August 3 2009, 05:37:51 UTC

Thanks! =]
(and dude, how have we never met. you like Torchwood, Green Day and I can only assume Angel from your Christian Kane ava, yes? You're awesome. >.> )

cool_tre_cool August 3 2009, 17:14:43 UTC

(I know! It's insane. Yeah, I was (and still am) a big Joss fan, so AtS, BtVS, Firefly, all of his stuff. You?)

finksgirl August 3 2009, 20:16:32 UTC

haha same.
Angel was my favourite. Buffy and now Dollhouse... (never saw Firefly yet)