This is the copy I submitted.
I changed it a fair bit, but I still kept a lot of it the same. -.-''
I like this copy WAY better.
After getting the feedback from Mr Slade from my draft, I was able to edit it.
Can't wait to see my result. Should get it on Monday (fingers crossed).
Cry
It was years before Valerii returned, but he knew right away
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