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fishisbad

Bite the Bullet - Ruki/Aoi

Sep 08, 2009 10:47

Chapters: Oneshot
Genre: Smut, Humor
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Summary: Going around his own kitchen half hard and being unable to have a single meal without thinking inappropriate thoughts about his own table wasn’t exactly the way Aoi liked to spend his free days. And to think it was all Ruki’s fault.
Word count: 1,745
Disclaimer: I'm in no way ( Read more... )

gazefic, yaoi, rukixaoi

Comments 62

xenocia September 9 2009, 06:58:17 UTC

I love Ruki as a seme :)

Have a hard time seeing him as anything but. Well done~

fishisbad September 9 2009, 07:15:53 UTC

It surprises me how many people commented on Ruki seme thing. I find it the usual thing :) Thank you!

xenocia September 9 2009, 07:23:12 UTC

I think in part it's because he's so tiny and in part because he's so often paired with Reita, but it feels like he's shoved into the role of uke a lot :o

fishisbad September 9 2009, 07:34:02 UTC

Yes, Reita/Ruki is a popular pairing, but lately I think I've seen Ruki being the dominating one there too. I don't remember last time I've seen Ruki being fragile little uke.

Thread 7

soloyuymaxwell September 9 2009, 11:49:01 UTC

Awesome! *_* That table is so damn lucky! I don't feel sorry for it at all, along with any other surface of the house they might defile!

Ruki's shortness and attitude scream uberseme! XD

fishisbad September 9 2009, 13:56:39 UTC

I don't feel sorry for table either :) Thanks.

gratiela September 9 2009, 19:18:53 UTC

OMG, I've been out of town for 5 days and you're writing!!!!!

*goes to read!@_@*

fishisbad September 9 2009, 19:23:14 UTC

And your absence was noticed! Don't fall asleep halfway. (I still can't read through it without getting bored.)

gratiela September 16 2009, 08:39:12 UTC

*gets shot in the leg* I actually DID fall asleep while I was reading, damn.... Physical exhaustion, probably.

But to be perfectly honest, I didn't really loved this smut as much as your other writings. I dunno, it may also be that I'm quite in a messy state, I dunno.
Actually it was very realistic and had a good flow - maybe I just want to drug myself on some fluff..
I'm PMSing

fishisbad September 16 2009, 08:57:10 UTC

Oh, boy :DDDDDDDDD I once fell asleep looking over this while I was still in the process of trying to write it.

I can't tell you how much it makes me happy to hear you be perfectly honest. Because getting comments to this story, it felt like people didn't like it really. And I just kept wishing someone will tell me. But of course it is not easy being honest, I am not exactly sure how much of it I could take without feeling hurt. But it pleases me you were honest, maybe because it is you. I don't know.

I personally don't like this piece much either. I wrote it because heygeorge wanted table porn, but I never felt it properly. Writing it. It gave me so much trouble and I was happy when I first sent it to her and she said she liked it. But for some reason I grew to almost hate it. I can't explain why. I can't pinpoint what is wrong with the story, I am just not feeling it. But what is done is done.

Sorry for all the soul baring. PMSing too.

Thread 9

viciousfaye69 September 11 2009, 00:09:52 UTC

HAWT >//<
I know Aoi will never look at his kitchen in the same way again.
I loved your aggressive Ruki ^^

fishisbad September 11 2009, 07:24:52 UTC

I am glad that you liked it. Thank you for your comment!

yhue September 12 2009, 19:32:41 UTC

Ooh.

OOoooh.

8DD D*Ddjfks8DD8D8DDds8

Oh wait what was that.

YES, YES TO TABLE PORN AND YES TO RUKI LICKING AOI'S SWEAT AND YES TO INSTANT NOODLES AND EVERYTHING HERE.

fishisbad September 12 2009, 19:54:23 UTC

I am glad you noticed the noodles, I really wanted them in the fic for Ruki to be able to show his flare. They are pretty much pointless and story could live without them, but I couldn't help it. I am happy you liked the table porn. Thank you :)