Bite the Bullet - Ruki/Aoi

Sep 08, 2009 10:47

Chapters: Oneshot
Genre: Smut, Humor
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Summary: Going around his own kitchen half hard and being unable to have a single meal without thinking inappropriate thoughts about his own table wasn’t exactly the way Aoi liked to spend his free days. And to think it was all Ruki’s fault.
Word count: 1,745
Disclaimer: I'm in no way ( Read more... )

gazefic, yaoi, rukixaoi

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honigtropfen January 3 2010, 16:09:40 UTC
i like ruki's roughness and that he pretty much seems to seek his own pleasure first. and you described that really well with ruki not bothering to find aoi's weak spots, stimulating his prostate or jerking him off during the sex. little fucker ruki ♥. i'd say poor aoi but i like ruki way too much like that. before i paired him up with kai, he was always my über-seme-ruki ;)
the ending was great and funny. of course teh ruki wouldnt be satisfied with instant noodles.

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fishisbad January 3 2010, 16:15:55 UTC
Oh, I hate the actual smut here, it was just too pushed because I was writing for George. But yeah, characterization of Ruki was how I though George would like him. But thank you for commenting :)

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honigtropfen January 3 2010, 17:02:36 UTC
oh really? i liked that it was so rushed here.
i like ruki very much like that, too :)

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quarrions January 6 2010, 10:16:15 UTC
this is some EPIC SHIT!!!

but the ending was the most epic part <333333

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xichigojam March 29 2010, 09:29:31 UTC
wow, first time I've read a Ruki/Aoi fanfic:)
And I liked it:D:D

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