Yellow - Uruha/Reita

Dec 02, 2009 18:39

Chapters: Oneshot
Genre: Friendship, Romance (hint of)
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Summary: "In the worst case I can be your girlfriend."
Word count: 447
Disclaimer: I'm in no way affiliated with the GazettE or PS Company.
Characters are fictional. Any resemblance to actual people is purely coincidental.

The alley behind the live house )

gazefic, uruhaxreita

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:D:D:D:D"D gratiela December 2 2009, 17:42:43 UTC
HA! I was just thinking about you today- in terms of writing you a message along the lines COME SPAMMMMMM MEEEEEEEEE!!!! ♥

*goes to reaaaaaaaaaaaad*

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Re: :D:D:D:D"D fishisbad December 2 2009, 17:54:53 UTC
I know it is not good anyway.

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gratiela December 2 2009, 18:04:50 UTC
I don't know what you intended this to be like, but it turnerd out to be a soulful moment- like those where you suddenly learn to breathe again.
Even if everything seemed to be wrong for Rei, all confidence and hope drained, his friend was there- helping him to get up and move on. Or at least start to.

Oh, and I didn't miss the tightening feeling♥
"I’ll always be there for you."

"Oh, really?" Reita chuckled to help ease tightening feeling around his heart. a hope for more?

So what if there's no lightbulb anymore? the warmth of the hug will do. And the drizzle washing the slate clean!♥

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fishisbad December 2 2009, 18:13:58 UTC
I don't know either. I felt like there should be something more It bothers me that I don't know what am I missing and yet feel like there should be more to this. But yes, the general idea of friendship and love is there. You are too kind with your comment.

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noizstar December 2 2009, 18:50:07 UTC
aww, this was adorable. x3 i really like when people write friendships like this. it's sweet & heart-warming, nice for a cold day.

i don't think anything is missing, it felt like a complete moment to me. :3 the last line expresses so much.

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fishisbad December 2 2009, 18:56:27 UTC
Well, thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it and thank you for your opinion :)

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laurasljn December 2 2009, 21:16:04 UTC
I love this "Yes, she was." Reita was just too sweet for his own good, she was quite cruel. "Even Aoi noticed." - and if clueless Aoi noticed it then she must be a real bitch :)))))That line made me laugh

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fishisbad December 2 2009, 21:26:04 UTC
Ha ha, to tell you the truth I am not sure what I wanted to say about Aoi there. Yes, it seems like I am making him clueless here. It is amusing to make bit fun of him. I didn't know how to write it, but I thought about saying how even usually polite Aoi could make a comment about Reita's girl because she was so truly mean to poor Reita. Yes, you got me babbling :) Thank you for commenting!

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j_choiseul December 2 2009, 21:34:09 UTC
That was enjoyable. I smiled. I was listening to Viva la Vida when I was reading this, too, which was kind of weird and cool.

^.^

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fishisbad December 2 2009, 21:37:00 UTC
Thank you. I am glad this was able to make you smile :) Weird things coincidences happening are the best. Thank you for your comment!

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