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flambeau

SGA: Tastes like summer

Jul 30, 2006 10:34

Yet another snippet, for pierson, who suggested a couple of different things but the one I went with was more of the helpless plaything 'verse. 4,900 words (all together now, CARRIED AWAY), NC-17. Many thanks to marycrawford, and nothing is her fault. *g*

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graycastle July 30 2006, 12:29:54 UTC

uh. wow.

yeah.

this is so 100% john's dream vacation, and he can't even pretend otherwise. yay for this universe!

flambeau July 30 2006, 20:23:01 UTC

Yay! hee. Yes, poor John, trapped in this terrible place with nothing to do but eat pava fruit and have sex. woe. *evil grin* Thanks!

graycastle July 30 2006, 21:35:12 UTC

...eat pava fruit, have sex, and get high. poor soul.

flambeau July 30 2006, 21:48:06 UTC

Oh right, that too. The tragic suffering just never ends.

the_shoshanna July 30 2006, 12:58:31 UTC

How can something be this cool, and this hot, simultaneously? That Rodney and Ronon are still Rodney and Ronon (signal bell system, water heaters, hee!), and John with the barely thinking about it and then willingly taking the drug again, oh god . . . John is not the only one who still wants more!

flambeau July 30 2006, 20:42:28 UTC

You know Rodney would invent all kinds of things to make the simple soldiering warlording life a bit more comfortable. And John is kind of a mess. Or having a really good vacation. or both. I'm totally planning on more, although there's a bunch of other stuff I have to write first. Anyway, thank you very much! :)

justabi July 30 2006, 12:59:38 UTC

Guh. I love John all desperate for it. And bonding with the soldier boys! Yay!

flambeau July 30 2006, 20:43:42 UTC

Ford's a sweet guy in any universe, I think. Well, any enzyme-free universe. *g* And thank you! :)

melagan July 30 2006, 13:00:27 UTC

Wicked Yummy

flambeau July 30 2006, 20:45:07 UTC

Thank you! :)

saffronhouse July 30 2006, 14:18:13 UTC

How you know you're reading a Torch story:

It may be a Helpless Plaything universe, but there's still plenty of time for weather patterns and savings accounts!

Lovely, lovely, lovely.

flambeau July 30 2006, 20:46:39 UTC

Yes, but no one brushed their teeth onscreen... ;) Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it! And I'm sure John is better off with a savings account, at least until he can afford his own mattress.