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Fic: Grace - Chapter 10

Jan 17, 2007 20:55

Title: Grace - Chapter 10
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: P!atd (Brendon/Ryan)

Loretta will spend forever telling me that she has been married twice.

Once to her husband, a man with no hair and a bazillion degrees in art and literature and business. A man with humble tendencies and crooked teeth and a small art gallery in the LA that Ryan lives in.

Second, ( Read more... )

grace, panic at the disco, bandom

Comments 77

spottedcricket January 17 2007, 14:03:32 UTC

Wowwowwowwow! That wasn't the sexiest sex scene but it was right and it fit and wow. You story is extrodinary! I'm in love with it!

I was thinking when I got on 'that'd be awesome if Grace updated.' I logged in and hey, you're second on my friend's page! Yay, you made my day.

I love your writing. It's awesome!!! <3

flash_indie January 18 2007, 00:46:14 UTC

Thankyouthankyouthankyou. I'm sorry about the wait and stuff. *sweatdrops*

ninatron January 17 2007, 14:19:18 UTC

=O

I actually finished that with my mouth slightly open and I just sat there frozen for a while.

This chapter was truly amazing. The characters just stun me.

Cant wait for more.
<33

flash_indie January 18 2007, 00:47:04 UTC

*blushblushblush* Thank you so much!

dontquittill47 January 17 2007, 14:21:34 UTC

I love you. Seriously. Just... I'll put something coherent later.

flash_indie January 18 2007, 00:47:36 UTC

Eheh, thanks!

rock_my_town January 17 2007, 14:34:59 UTC

omg *cries* that was so amazing. I got really excited when I saw the nc-17 rating at the top...I just knew I would love this chpater.....I cannot wait to see what happens next...I'm addicted, dammit!

flash_indie January 18 2007, 00:48:35 UTC

Thank you! I'll have to get the next update up soon then, huh?

rock_my_town January 18 2007, 01:31:15 UTC

oh yes, I'm already starting to go through some serious withdrawal, and it hasn't even been 24 hours since i read this! (no pressure, though lol)

blushandrecover January 17 2007, 15:55:59 UTC

Ahh, best birthday present ever. And yes, I know logically that you did not write and post this for my birthday, but still. And if I'm late to my next class for reading this, it's worth it. (Probably more worth it than the class itself is.)

There are strings everywhere, all over him and all over me, wrapped around his eyes and his lips and his body, I can see them everywhere, draping off him and crawling beneath my skin. I’ve never felt this, never seen or touched or felt these spindly wires.

That's probably my favorite bit, but I love all of it. I'm impressed by your style and flow and characterization and, well, all of it. So kudos, I guess.

flash_indie January 18 2007, 00:50:51 UTC

Happy Birthday!

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed!

(Well, I updated mine, now you gotta go update yours, yes?)

blushandrecover January 18 2007, 05:46:11 UTC

Thank you!

(This really ridiculous thing called College- with its silly things known as Classes- has taken over my life for the moment. Homework abounds. Reading must be done. Films must be watched. Spanish must be reviewed. It's all very sad and not conducive to writing at all. Hopefully I'll get on it this weekend? I need to get inspired, though. I need to find myself a prompt. Wow, this is long. But yes, nag and you shall receive.)

flash_indie January 18 2007, 06:24:18 UTC

You're welcome!

(Don't you just hate it when real life gets in the way? I hope inspiration hits you with the force of a wayward vehicle. *lovelovelove*)