Fic: Grace - Chapter 10

[flash_indie]

Title: Grace - Chapter 10
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: P!atd (Brendon/Ryan)

Loretta will spend forever telling me that she has been married twice.

Once to her husband, a man with no hair and a bazillion degrees in art and literature and business. A man with humble tendencies and crooked teeth and a small art gallery in the LA that Ryan lives in.

Second,

Comments

[dawn_afterglow]

I knew people would love it. I noticed you added a little bit to the beginning. I don't really know what to comment on without sounding repetitive, but yeah...like a lot of other people, I loved that part with the strings. And your imagery is, as always, fantastic. ♥

[flash_indie]

Thanks. ^^

I did add a little bit at the beginning, I didn't send it coz I didn't really think it was worth it. It really wasn't/isn't a lot.

[mandy_croyance]

My God, woman.

What the hell were you worried about? No. Honestly. This chapter is perfect, and I'm not stroking your ego here, or exagerating, or doing anything remotely so inane. This was literally perfect; as in the absolute ideal; as in the most fitting sequence and portrayal of events imaginably possible

[flash_indie]

Everyone's being so lovely now, that it kinda makes me feel stupid for holding off posting the chapter for so long. I just felt like there was something missing, I still feel a little like there's something missing. I dunno.

I was painfully nervous about writing the sex scene, like, the whole way through, and I ended up writing it in one hit, like, all at once, and then proceeded to freak out and nitpick and obsess over the quality level, and...and I dunno. Thank you though, *hugs*

Eheh, I guess I should probably scurry off to write the next chapter then, huh? *loves you*

(don't be nervous to show me yours! I'm sure I'll love it.^^)

[lotrnhp4eva]

I am absolutely in love with this story. It's just so beautiful and the whole sex scene is heartbreaking but also wonderful and I know I'm not making any sense here but hey not all of us have your way eith words :)

[flash_indie]

Thank you so much. ^^

[insanitydidit_x]

This chapter.
This whole story.
It's all amazing. It's just...
It really is perfect.
=]
And I can't wait for more.

[flash_indie]

Thank you! Next chapter should be up soon-ish.

[old_plain_me]

I cant think properly.
How do you do it?
I have nothing to say, cause this was perfection.
God...! I really love how your mind is working with
this story...
I admire you. And okay I envy you (you know in a good way)-
*sigh* i love it.

[flash_indie]

Your comments always make me giggle. Thank you so much, I'm glad you're enjoying it!