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Fic: Grace - Chapter 13

Mar 25, 2007 11:21

Title: Grace - Chapter 13 (part 2/2)
Rating: M
Fandom: P!atd (Brendon/Ryan)

( She’s wearing her heart on the bangles around her wrist; she doesn’t notice it dripping blood all over the floor, all over her bare thighs. )

the country inside my head, grace, panic at the disco, bandom

Comments 59

mandy_croyance March 25 2007, 01:34:54 UTC

This chapter killed me. Cut me right down to the quick. That final line - especially after what Catherine and Audrey had said - wrapped it's spiney fingers around my throat and stole my breath.

These are the type of moments that make me love fiction.

P.S. Are you online? We need to do some more writing at some point in the near future. I'm pretty much always online (often late into the wee hours of the morning). Just drop me a line.

flash_indie March 26 2007, 22:00:20 UTC

Heh, lovelovelove.

Glad you enjoyed it, there are certain scenes that I have had planned/written since I started writing this, like the strings bit, and the last bit of this chapter with Spencer and there's one scene in a few more chapters where Ryan finally steps back in and does something. Also the last scene of the like, entire thing. (Not many chapters to go now actually, it's all very exciting.)

So thank you. ^^

PS. I have written a bit more which I'll try to send you soon-ish, but uhm, my last real exams for the next few weeks are today (maths and modern history) so I can really knuckle down, and be more online and shit after today. I'm so sorry I have been like, the epitome of unreliable-ness. I've just been really stressed because of these exams.

old_plain_me March 25 2007, 02:01:05 UTC

Every time. Every single time you update.
I end up crying. Why? 'Cause i can feel it.
I need a hug right now. Really.
This is my favorite story. And iloveyou.
God. Just amazing.

flash_indie March 26 2007, 22:01:55 UTC

Iloveyouback.

Guh, my aim isn't to make you cry, but if this whole thing can really bring about that sort of emotion, then just *yay* *hugs*.

Thank you so, so much.

loving4tomorrow March 25 2007, 02:06:30 UTC

That just...that just killed me. That last line, it was just so untrue and Brendon is trying so hard not to see it and...it's just....wow. After Audry and Catherine and even Loretta and Spencer of all people were able to tell I felt like someone had split me open. Your writing is just so amasing....I'm jealous and speechless. Just, seriously....wow.

flash_indie March 26 2007, 22:04:07 UTC

I know! Ryan! He lies! Not a passing feeling, not at all, it's pretty goddamn deep seeded, wrapped around their feet, rooting them to the spot. Vines around their arms, around each other.

And wow, thank you! Glad you're enjoying it. ^^

ajkulig March 25 2007, 02:15:48 UTC

Amanda told me this story was about to be updated, I am so glad it was true! God Audrey killed me- killed.

Good fiction from an amazing writer makes me fuzzy on the inside.

Thank you.

flash_indie March 27 2007, 05:37:04 UTC

Ahah, thank you!

Glad you're enjoying it. ^^

dorkle_07 March 25 2007, 02:46:27 UTC

OH MY GOD....

This slayed me..

Why Ryan?! WHY WHY WHY?!

flash_indie March 27 2007, 05:37:39 UTC

Why?! will be answered later, yes?