hah, this is really funny. doesn't pull off the prose-broken-into-lines thing so well, i think it probably would just be better as prose, but nevertheless, thank you for sharing.
You might be right about that one. I keep toggling back and forth between the two format choices, but was leaning ever so slightly to this only because it's how I read it aloud.
Thank you. It may change radically still, and you've just given me more to think about.
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Thank you. It may change radically still, and you've just given me more to think about.
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