Comments | fleetrun: A Poem

fleetrun

A Poem - By the Fleet

Sep 29, 2004 20:08

( Soul Lost )

Comments 12

spacecowgirl626 September 30 2004, 21:22:29 UTC

..aww...that was really good.
and yes..i have thought of it.
it really hit close to how i feel..actually

fleetrun September 30 2004, 22:59:20 UTC

It did? wow

spacecowgirl626 October 1 2004, 15:55:03 UTC

yeah..its weird. its exactly how i feel.

spacecowgirl626 October 1 2004, 16:02:05 UTC

especially the 'burden' part..

shadow_shi13 October 1 2004, 03:10:22 UTC

Lovely poem. You're a great writer =]

Inspired by you spacecowgirl626? I must say, I know how you feel... the world can be a depressing place...

I feel like I'm intruding, I shall leave now....

fleetrun October 1 2004, 03:16:22 UTC

No its alright; I dont mind any comments

shadow_shi13 October 2 2004, 18:00:06 UTC

okay ^_^

spacecowgirl626 October 1 2004, 15:58:36 UTC

yep.
some people are happy and some people fucking hate their lives..
we can guess which category i fit into..^_^'

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kazumi_otachi October 2 2004, 03:19:41 UTC

Skish...Fleet thats a really deep poem. It's very good, so I can't see why your english teacher would have a problem with it.

fleetrun October 2 2004, 04:38:00 UTC

I talked to her; she said it would be fine