Spliced: Part 5 - Chapter 3

Jan 22, 2011 07:30

TITLE: Spliced 5-3
AUTHOR: flighty_dreams
WARNINGS: NC-17. slavefic. scifi setting. M/m. some graphic violence.
WORD COUNT:  4,835 (this chapter), over 200k so far
SUMMARY:  In a world where clones are made and sold as commodities, Matt Muldane can't resist purchasing an intriguing slave.
NOTES:  The index to this story available here. Special thanks to aurila and to tuawahineRead more... )

slavefic, spliced, original fic, scifi

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vmmackie January 23 2011, 09:42:15 UTC
Great as always. Thanks for the update :-D

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flighty_dreams January 23 2011, 20:36:03 UTC
You're welcome, thanks!

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lab_jazz January 23 2011, 09:47:26 UTC
Great update and somehow chapter two had passed me by, so I got two for the price of one :)

I love this story ♥

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flighty_dreams January 23 2011, 20:36:44 UTC
That's always nice, a double helping!

Aww, glad you're still reading.

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tuawahine January 23 2011, 19:09:04 UTC
With a wry look, Min said at last, “We're a pair, aren't we?”

He didn't resist when Matt slid an arm around him. “Yeah, we are.”

I love the image of the two of them, sitting there contemplating how they make things difficult for each other. It has a bit of an old-married-couple vibe. :P

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flighty_dreams January 23 2011, 20:39:06 UTC
Lol, it does, doesn't it? That sense of long familiarity. Oh, boys.

And I saw your email! I'll get back to you soon.

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triptyx January 23 2011, 21:02:55 UTC
Well at least Matt had sex with Min after that party! Its one of the things I wrote you I was hoping for this chapter! ;) >:D >:D The rest of the list I dont know why didnt make an appearance!! ;)

I just LOL at this part “Then the deal would’ve fallen through the moment he asked to borrow you.” Can I say it is os much fun to imagine Matt if someone asks to fuck Min! >:D >:D None of the owners of your boys are the sharing kinds are they? >:D >:D Its just a degree of danger that accompanies that question, getting you executed with the Queen and well I dont know how much maiming Matt and Jenna are capable off, Jenna maybe just ruins their life economically! >;)

“I love that growl,” Will there be conditioning for getting the puppy to growl more? >;) But this was really a hot scene, I liked it a lot even if the fucking didnt come after a whipping!!! :D :D

You know that unlike for you and Min I find Matt's inability to apologize ... only done after mind-blowing sex, when you're relaxed and more agreeable, and said in the dark. That's how ( ... )

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flighty_dreams February 3 2011, 00:24:56 UTC
Lol, yes you got at least one of your wishes. :P See? I'm good to you!

Yeah I picture much snarling on Matt's part at the very idea, and perhaps even a punch to the face or a kick in the balls hehe. But yes, I do seem to have that protective/possessiveness as a recurring theme, don't I... nah, totally not a kink!

Lol. Is that your way of saying you like the growl, to condition the 'puppy' to do it more? :P And I will remember this part: "But this was really a hot scene, I liked it a lot even if the fucking didnt come after a whipping!!! :D :D" You said it! Whipping not required for hotness! :D

Mhmm, of course you would enjoy Matt's quirks. :P It's okay, Min is amused as well as exasperated!

Sigh! We (and Min) will all be 90 years old and you still won't have forgotten. But yes *cackle* at Matt's subconscious! >:D

Aww @ your awww. They really do deserve each other, in good ways as well as bad. XD

Thanks very much, I'm happy you enjoyed the update.

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Update anonymous January 24 2011, 13:37:52 UTC
I read all the story and I'm happy you upadated!
It's a beautiful and well written story.

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Re: Update flighty_dreams February 3 2011, 00:13:36 UTC
Thanks, glad you're enjoying it. :-)

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