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Spliced: Part 5 - Chapter 4

Mar 20, 2011 19:20

TITLE: Spliced 5-4
AUTHOR: flighty_dreams
WARNINGS: NC-17. slavefic. scifi setting. M/m. some graphic violence.
WORD COUNT: 6,295 (this chapter), over 200k so far
SUMMARY: In a world where clones are made and sold as commodities, Matt Muldane can't resist purchasing an intriguing slave.
NOTES: The index to this story available here. Special thanks to aurila and to tuawahine ( Read more... )

slavefic, spliced, original fic, scifi

Comments 35

darkblue_ice March 22 2011, 02:28:52 UTC

Nooooooo! There's no more!! lol I can't wait for more. Spent 3 days reading from the beginning =)

flighty_dreams March 31 2011, 00:22:45 UTC

Aww, glad I got you hooked on it. Sadly you'll have to wait now, but thanks for reading!

lab_jazz March 22 2011, 23:41:05 UTC

This amazing story just keeps trundling along and getting better and better. I love where Matt and Min's relationship is at the moment...where they have relaxed some but they are still very much feeling their way along.

flighty_dreams March 31 2011, 00:23:27 UTC

Thanks so much. I liked the way you described it. They've made progress yes, but still feeling their way along indeed.

glorafin March 27 2011, 14:59:42 UTC

It's been good reading this. I had missed those characters. :)

I like that most of this chapter takes place outside. It gives a fresh view on Min and Matt's current arrangement.

flighty_dreams March 31 2011, 00:24:20 UTC

Thanks for reading. Yeah it was fun to have some different settings this time. And puppies!

spike7451 March 28 2011, 13:11:46 UTC

Always so very happy to see more of your story. :)

Gets better and better.

I see Matt still can't help the term "clones" in his head can he?

...They were alone in the living room now, the clones outside playing with the dogs.

... when will you learn Matt!!

Will these two ever get it right?

Good to see Hollis and Nuit make an appearance. Would that Matt wold really listen to what Hollis is saying.

Still want to slap Matt up the head from time to time. lol.

flighty_dreams March 31 2011, 00:25:39 UTC

Thanks so much. Will they ever get it right? Good question lol. Yeah, it would be nice.

Lol, I know the feeling. To both of them. :-)

kiyadreams March 29 2011, 04:25:02 UTC

My first question is do you even like Matt ( ... )

flighty_dreams May 7 2011, 12:47:22 UTC

Of course I do? That line kind of comes off as a personal attack ( ... )

kiyadreams June 12 2011, 05:38:01 UTC

I'm sorry I don't mean for it to be a personal attack. It's just an honest question as I have author friends who when I read their work generally I fall for a character and when I ask the author if things will get better for my favourite character in the sequel, they generally laugh and say no they don't like the character enough to change things for them. That they wrote the character to be hated. And as this story has progressed and Matt's life is going down in flames I wondered if I had backed a hated character again ( ... )