Fix My Ego --30STM Slash--

[flintera]

Title:Fix My Ego
Author: flintera
Pairing: Jared x Shannon
Rating: NC17
Disclaimer: I own nothing, and it never happened. *waves hand* These aren’t the droids you’re looking for. . .
Warnings: Sex and incest
A/N: Kind of new to 30STM, forgive me if their personalities come out wrong. This is a giftfic for ojaganshi.

Comments

[hephs_thighs]

That was amazing! Thanks for sharing with us! <3

[flintera]

Yay! I'm glad!! Thank you for reading!! ^^

[vamm_goda]

Wow! Really great fic - I never would have thought this was your first try. Jared in particular is wonderful!

[flintera]

Aww, Thank you so much!! ♥
I've been writing my own original stories for awhile, but this was my first attempt at this kind of story, it was fun!! =3
I'm glad you liked it!!
Thank you again! ♥ ♥ ♥

[felinemuse]

“I think you’re being a drama queen.” Shannon replied with a raised eyebrow. Jared narrowed his eyes.
“You’ve killed my ego, Shan. Killed it.” Jared looked away for a moment then glanced sideways at his older brother.
“You better fix it, otherwise I’ll never sing again.”
Until this moment, I never would have pictured Jared saying this, yet as I read it, it somehow fit perfectly and I couldn't believe that I hadn't pictured such a mildly comical moment between the brothers before.

This fic had so many good little moments; I like that you mixed humor with sex without making it cheesy or porn-y. I also particularly loved:
“Mmm, nap time for Jared now.” Jared mumbled against his brother’s neck. Shannon ran a hand through Jared’s hair.
“Am I so good that I drove you to talking in third person?” Shannon asked and kissed Jared on the forehead.
“Mmm, shut up.” Jared mumbled back and Shannon laughed.

I look forward to seeing more from you!

[flintera]

THANK YOU SOO MUCH!!!! Really, Thank you!! I love getting in depth comments, it makes writing that much more enjoyable! Thank you again!!

[kojima]

wark!

[ojaganshi]

wtf does that mean? XD;

[flintera]

Wark? What the heck is wark? >>;

[siv_the_fish]

Its the sound of a Chocobo. I think its a happy noise.

[methosdeb]

very hot letocest (my fav) nice lead up to the sex (computer is never more interesting than jared -bad Shannon)loved it

[flintera]

Aww, =3
I'm glad you liked it!! ^.~
And yes, now Shannon knows better, but I doubt he'd mind a repeat performance! XDDD