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bleodswean May 18 2020, 17:28:27 UTC
Fantastic! This could be a riveting YA novel!

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brkfastatholly May 18 2020, 18:33:31 UTC
Whoooa, this was awesome - I totally want more of this!! I agree with the above comment, I'm in for this to be the next big YA novel! :D

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lyssa027 May 18 2020, 18:53:10 UTC
Thirded. This would be a great YA novel

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rayaso May 18 2020, 22:09:08 UTC
There really is the kernel of a novel here. I loved the paranoia feeling to this. Great work.

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samantha May 18 2020, 23:28:40 UTC
This is so great. I am also waiting for the book to come out pls and thx ♥

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