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banana_galaxy March 28 2022, 02:39:49 UTC
This was really beautiful. I also appreciated how they were all named after plants. As someone who tends to choose character names very carefully, I like it when I notice things like that.

I enjoyed the way you wove the mythology through with the reality, and described when things shifted between belief and disbelief, then back again.

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mollywheezy March 28 2022, 19:53:50 UTC
This was so beautiful it made me cry! The good kind of tears. Excellent work!

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viagra March 30 2022, 17:41:50 UTC
Aww, this was really beautiful! I love the idea of the inheritance, of the generations that came before staying to protect those that come after. I enjoyed this a lot!

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murielle March 30 2022, 21:32:21 UTC
Okay. This made me cry. So beautiful! I love it. I love everything about it.
Brava! Brava! Brava!

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joyfulfeather March 31 2022, 19:11:37 UTC
This is so lovely. Thank you for the soft, hopeful story.

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