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Fanfiction: Wondering (in Circles) [Divergent]

Mar 30, 2014 09:02

Title: Wondering [in Circles]
Fandom: Divergent series
Prompt: Gone
Medium: fic
Chapters: 1/1
Wordcount: 251
Rating: G
Warnings: Spoilers for end of Allegiant.
Summary: She wished she didn't have to leave him. That was all he had left. That was what he could build on.
Other notes: Four/Tris. Written for lj community 1_million_words March Bingo.

( He has those final words from her, the memories of her. )

fanfiction, divergent series

Comments 3

asphaltcowgrrl March 31 2014, 22:27:24 UTC

I was sooooooooooo upset with how Allegiant ended I can't even tell you... I see why it needed to end the way it did, but that doesn't mean I have to like it, right?

But thank you for this little bit of closure. Well-written and so true to character. Nice job!

fluffybun April 1 2014, 20:03:50 UTC

I know what you mean! Gahhhh. When I got to Four coming back and finding out about Tris I was trying to suspend my disbelief - hoping for it to be a great fakeout. Then it sunk in and gaaaaaah. :(( Poor Four and Tris. :(

Thank you for reading it and for your comments :) Happy to see another reader of Divergent in the comm :)

asphaltcowgrrl April 1 2014, 20:56:15 UTC

RIGHT? I'm like - this can't be happening - and it was. My husband found me bawling in my chair with my Kindle clutched in my hand. LOL He just shook his head at me. I suppose you shouldn't ever expect a happy ending in a dystopian setting.

You are so welcome! I've not read any Divergent fic yet, and yours caught my attention, so glad it did! Hope to see more from you now. :)