[Fanfic] Waiting on Forever (9/12)

[flyingfortress]

Title: Waiting on Forever
Genre: Angst, hurt/comfort, fluff
Pairing(s)/Characters: USUK. Brief mentions of fem!Canada and others.
Rating: PG13
Warning(s): Alternative universe. Brief sensuality.
Summary: In death, Alfred F. Jones relives his sixty-seven years of life. He summons memories of friendship, love, and loss, and looks for the one person who

Comments

[ren_chan146]

Yay first to comment.^^

Even though this chapter is short it's still beautiful. I can feel small tears at the corners of my eyes but I won't let them out...or at least try.
Alfreds answer to all those question is so...I can't even describe it properly. He's such a good guy. To find someone who loves you like that must be true bliss.

[lilsandstorm]

I love this chapter. Very beautifully done and emotional... I feel the chocked sobs at the back of my throat.

[j_sasunaru_c]

Despite his obnoxious character, the deeper part of him fulfilling his promise of forever, is one that is so rare and pure that it tugged my heartstrings. Ah, I can't still fathom how he lived his days, knowing true happiness, and having it lost at a mere age of what, 22? and he died at 65. oh, dear, the time, the long long time of just living without a reason

[kasumicc]

;____; This was so sad yet beautiful, that Alfred kept his promise to the very end. I just can't imagine living 40-something years that way...

Looking forward to the next one!

[hoshiko2]

TWO MORE TO GO?! WHAT?!

Will they get to meet in the after life?! Oh I'm so saddened to know that Al practically waited until he died without any meaning in his life. I hope that his afterlife will be much more and he can be at peace.