비빔밥

Dec 14, 2010 15:17

Title: 비빔밥
Author: flyintoheaven
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Focus: Jinki, OT5
Summary: The Shinee members get up early to prepare something special for Jinki’s birthday.

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fanfic, onew, ot5

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ontaejongminkey December 14 2010, 07:41:21 UTC
*sobs endlessly* this is SO SWEET! thanks for sharing :) can we be friends dear? Im new here at lj >.

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flyintoheaven December 14 2010, 07:58:34 UTC
thank you so much for commenting! :) sure! welcome to lj <3

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ontaejongminkey December 14 2010, 08:03:14 UTC
no problem :)

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playingods December 14 2010, 07:45:48 UTC
Yah, the way you describe how the food tasted REALLY making my stomach growling. LOL.

Okay so this is soooooo cute. I love the way Key being the umma and taking care of his other band mates' doing on Jinki's breakfast surprise. The little brotherly ontae on the beginning is also so yuuuum! :3

Thanks for sharing this. Happy Birthday Lee Jinki ♥

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flyintoheaven December 14 2010, 08:01:14 UTC
thank you! just had bibimbap last week so i was trying to remember how it tasted, though the one in the story is little like it :-) key being the umma suddenly hit me while writing the story.

yes, happy birthday lee jinki! <3

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kohshine December 14 2010, 07:46:36 UTC
Haha no need to feel bad. It is well written! Frankly, i like this better than the Taemin fanfic. Happy birthday Onew! You portrayed their characters well :D

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flyintoheaven December 14 2010, 08:02:15 UTC
haha i think i like it better for different reasons :-D thank you! but i thought writing minho as being unable to crack the egg made my bias seem stupid -.-

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doongie December 14 2010, 08:54:18 UTC
“Of course I remember. We’ve planned this day for months. But can’t I just have five more minutes in bed, I’m a growing child...” Taemin muttered before stuffing his face in his pillow.
Oh Taemin, youuu...

"“Hyung, the rice isn’t warming up!” Taemin was puzzled. He’d put the rice inside the microwave, and set the time already, but nothing was happening. “Help me, hyung!”
Key rushed over and saw the problem straight away. Taemin didn’t plug the main switch into the power socket. Silly child!"
HEHEHE this reminds me of Hello Baby! Where he forgot to plug the main switch of the rice cooker into the power socket lol.

"His sense of competitiveness started to work its way in. He didn’t want to lose to eggs!"
Minho's competitiveness never fail to amuse me. And I actually adore competitive!Minho ;D

"Key made his way over to where Jonghyun was. “How are you doing?” He wrapped his arms around Jonghyun’s impossible tiny waist, and started to rock, their bodies moving together. Jonghyun turned to give him a quick kiss on the cheek."OIC NINJA! ( ... )

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flyintoheaven December 14 2010, 11:31:33 UTC
your long comment makes me happy ^^ yeah, taemin and the rice was a reference to hello baby! HAHA YES NINJA!JONGKEY, and the subtle ontae :)

my gosh, bimbimbap <3

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jinkibumiminho December 14 2010, 10:25:40 UTC
Awww, this is totally sweet, and now my stomach is growling! Thanks for sharing!

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flyintoheaven December 14 2010, 11:31:51 UTC
you're welcome! thanks for reading :)

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