Ok, so i sent off the 2 pages i have to Jake. I'm debating ending this part right where i have it, because as i said it's 2 pages (and they haven't even started doing anything). Either that or part 2 is going to be lenghty. *shrugs* i'll talk to Jake about it. I realized that i've described nothing about their physicality, and after careful
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