Fic for darkblysse - Seen too much

[picca]

Title: Seen too much
Author: picca
Beta readers: arteww and sarelon, murielago helped a bit too
Written for: darkblysse

Pairings: Ed/Hei, maybe something else too
Rating: mild R
Genre: angsty drama, kind of PWP, slight AU (Alfons didn’t die)
Word count: 737
Summary: And now, as they were finally together, he came into noticing his brother had already his other version beside him -

Comments

[darkblysse]

I loved it, hon! :D <3 And I'm amazed with how well you did, translating it over to English, too! :O

The angst in this was just great and I love how you brought out Alphonse's personality in it.

Thanks so much, dear! :D <333

[picca]

I'm very glad you liked it. It really was nice to write.

I was a bit worried about my English though I understand well, but writing is more difficult. I had to use several beta readers (and they were awesome <3). But I'm learning all the time, and I'd like to do more staff in English.

Thanks for lovely comment. <3