FOR EVERYONE READING THIS, IF THIS HAS BEEN SPORKED, IT'S MY FAULT FOR GIVING IT TO HER. I didn't see it any of the Spork's archives, so I figured why not... Anyway...
I've already told you my opinion on this... *shudders* I'm sporking the second chapter. Mine for this was the following:
One for the canon rape (yes, this includes Edward complex), one for the obvious gargantuan ego this chick has, one for lack of understanding the beauty of the English language (all her spelling errors and grammar mistakes that a brain dead monkey could correct), one for the sheer stupidity that came up with this fic, and one for obvious illogical situations (dude, if she went through the Gate as she tried to explain - or whatever - she'd be crushed and she woulda died, yo.). OH, and one for not understanding equivalent exchange. That's six, yo!
Also, I give myself one for not editing all your brackets >>
Yeah, she's a sue, she's bound to look stupid, but because of her actions to everything life threw at her, she looked MORE of an idiot...
God, i don't know why, but i'm thinking of Envy posing as an injured ishbalan child as the reason for the breakout...god, i should watch the anime...i've only read the manga (so far of course)
Thanks for your comment! I'm glad i did some good sporkin!
Comments 23
I've already told you my opinion on this... *shudders* I'm sporking the second chapter. Mine for this was the following:
One for the canon rape (yes, this includes Edward complex), one for the obvious gargantuan ego this chick has, one for lack of understanding the beauty of the English language (all her spelling errors and grammar mistakes that a brain dead monkey could correct), one for the sheer stupidity that came up with this fic, and one for obvious illogical situations (dude, if she went through the Gate as she tried to explain - or whatever - she'd be crushed and she woulda died, yo.). OH, and one for not understanding equivalent exchange. That's six, yo!
Also, I give myself one for not editing all your brackets >>
Reply
Reply
Reply
If need be, i'll edit it...In fact i think i will...
But i stick out like a sore thumb on the main fma_spork page with my spork...not...collapsed into a link...
Reply
Also, cut please!
Reply
You poor thing *pats your head*
Reply
Saph fixed it for me (giant flashing sign saying 'technilogically challenged' pointing towards her)
Reply
(The comment has been removed)
(The comment has been removed)
YAY! NUTHER OBAMA FAN!!! <3
Yeah, she's a sue, she's bound to look stupid, but because of her actions to everything life threw at her, she looked MORE of an idiot...
God, i don't know why, but i'm thinking of Envy posing as an injured ishbalan child as the reason for the breakout...god, i should watch the anime...i've only read the manga (so far of course)
Thanks for your comment! I'm glad i did some good sporkin!
Reply
Reply
I know, mine too, it's recovering though, after all my "OMGmustFixBrain" rampage for a good book to begin detoxing with.
Reply
AWFUL FIC OMGUH
Reply
I KNOW!!! but it helped me relieve some stress!
Reply
Reply
Reply
Leave a comment