I need someone to be honest and tell me ur thoughts on this poem for my final portfolio.
<*lj-cut text="the mother of all my poems"*>
Acts Of Contrition
2:00am,
alarm rings,
Open eyes
Feet on floor
Legs charged to move
Step, step, step, step,
Open door
Make sharp right
Turn faucet
Ignore mirror
Lift tooth brush
Place paste on brush
Wet brush
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