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Jul 09, 2010 01:26

PROMPT POST 1

Please make sure you've read the rules post first, and play nice!

Flat comment page here just to clarify, as a few people have been asking, art fills are also very much welcomed!

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anonymous August 6 2010, 23:54:01 UTC
ok so my guilty pleasure when it comes to fan fic is soul-bonding. so do something with that in a team-- two midfield magicians, a keeper and one of the centerbacks, a winger and a striker, whatever, just two guys with an amazing ~bond~ where they use it to really work together. can be sexual or not, but definitely with loads of intimacy description.

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anonymous August 8 2010, 06:04:29 UTC
Seconded so hard!

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anonymous October 31 2010, 10:15:50 UTC
working on this, but it's 5000 words already and it's not even half-done, so... well, you've waited this long, I figure a little longer won't hurt. XD just wanted to let you know you'll get it eventually!

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anonymous October 31 2010, 10:22:58 UTC
May I know the characters you're working on? Can't wait either way!

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anonymous October 31 2010, 10:44:19 UTC
Xavi and Iniesta, midfield maestros :) they were the first thing that came to mind for your prompt.

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the best luck I had was you | Xavi+Iniesta | 1/11 anonymous November 6 2010, 17:15:11 UTC
dear OP: thank you so much for an amazing prompt! I want to write more in this universe but I think this is self-contained enough to stand on its own and also I'm really impatient. XD so anyway, here you go, hope you like it!

the best luck I had was you

When Andres was at La Masia, they told the students that Cruyff was the first person to use bonding in football. It wasn't exactly true, but it was close enough - Cruyff was the first person to figure out how to make it work. People had tried before, but unless you were even a little sensitive nothing happened, and then if you were sensitive but you got bonded to the wrong partner, it drove you both crazy. Supposedly a couple of Dutch players in the second division had killed themselves, and after that nobody was interested in trying anymore. Then there was Cruyff, and the Dream Team. Of course, it all collapsed so suddenly and so spectacularly that even if anyone had worked out why the team sometimes seemed able to read each other's minds, there would have been no attempt at ( ... )

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the best luck I had was you | Xavi+Iniesta | 2/11 anonymous November 6 2010, 17:16:03 UTC
"Well, don't keep him up too late," Victor admonished, his eyes crinkling up in a smile. He started to walk away, past Andres, and leaned in to add more seriously in his ear, "I mean it, make sure you get enough sleep."

"Yes, mother," Andres sighed. Victor grinned again and wandered off towards Carles and Oleguer.

"Trouble?" Xavi inquired.

Andres blinked. "Oh. No, just, Victor… worries."

"It's not a bad thing, Andresito," Xavi said, smiling. "Shall we?"

Xavi didn't seem to mind the silence as they made their way up to their room, but Andres was nearly squirming by the time the door was shut behind them. "Should Carles be here too?" he blurted out.

Xavi turned to stare at him. "Puyi? Why?"

"If it's… I don't know, captain things, or…"

"Oh - oh." Xavi fumbled behind himself for the bed and sat down, still watching Andres and now frowning a little. "It's not anything like - Andrew, you didn't do anything wrong. You're not in trouble ( ... )

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the best luck I had was you | Xavi+Iniesta | 3/11 anonymous November 6 2010, 17:17:01 UTC
Xavi was still talking, something about not wanting to pressure him into anything he didn't want. The words weren't really important, so Andres thought it would be all right to interrupt. "Okay."

"…and nobody would - wait, what?"

"You can tell the míster I said yes. It's okay so long as it's you."

Xavi stopped dead for a moment, completely frozen. Then he brought up his other hand up to cup Andres' cheek, and hold his face still. "You don't have to do this."

"If it will help the team, then I want to," Andres said firmly. "The míster wouldn't ask if it wasn't necessary. And I trust you ( ... )

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the best luck I had was you | Xavi+Iniesta | 4/11 anonymous November 6 2010, 17:17:46 UTC
"What? No, I mean, I decided to do it, I told him that, he wouldn't listen but he's just being Xavi, you know, I'll have to tell him a few more times before he believes me, that's all," Andres rambled, unable to stop himself until he heard Guardiola chuckling ( ... )

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the best luck I had was you | Xavi+Iniesta | 5/11 anonymous November 6 2010, 17:18:46 UTC
Victor and Carles were both hanging out in the parking lot, leaning against Victor's car. They looked like they were having a pretty good time talking to each other, right up until Victor looked up and noticed Xavi and Andres coming towards them. Andres had never seen Victor's mother-hen instinct kick in that quickly, and concluded that he probably looked like absolute shit. "It went fine," he said, pre-empting Victor's inevitable interrogation, as Victor came over to help at the fastest pace possible that could still be called a walk. Between him and Xavi Andres managed to stagger to Victor's car without any mishaps, although he could already tell the late afternoon sunlight was going to give him a headache. Xavi dug in his jacket pocket and came up with a pair of sunglasses that he handed over without comment ( ... )

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the best luck I had was you | Xavi+Iniesta | 6/11 anonymous November 6 2010, 17:19:24 UTC
Victor hesitated, then patted Andres' hands. "He was up for a while watching you after you passed out. I talked to him a little."

"Victor!" Andres hissed. "He's our vice-captain and my bondmate, you are not allowed to threaten Xavi."

"I didn't threaten him," Victor said, with an eyeroll that Andres could actually hear in his voice even if he couldn't see it. "We just talked."

"But you're not going to tell me about what, right," Andres said.

"Right."

Andres sighed. He could probably pester whatever it was out of Victor, given enough time, but he wasn't sure it was worth it, and anyway Xavi was waking up. "All right. I'll be right back."

"Go back to bed! It's after midnight!" Victor called after him. "If you oversleep and make me late to practice tomorrow morning I will kill you ( ... )

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the best luck I had was you | Xavi+Iniesta | 7/11 anonymous November 6 2010, 17:20:16 UTC
"What?" Xavi said, sounding startled, and let him back in again. Xavi was - Xavi was worried about something, he could feel that now. He didn't like the feeling of Xavi's anxiety buzzing around in his head, but it was still a million times better than the blankness that had been there before. "Oh, fuck."

"I'm sorry," Andres blurted, "but I can't - please don't."

"Oh god, I'm so sorry," Xavi said, horrified. "I didn't think - I have to cut everyone else off, I'd go crazy if I knew where they all were off the pitch, too. I didn't realize - "

"I'm not everyone else, I'm your bondmate," Andres said, and maybe he was more upset about it than he'd realized, because he was starting to get hysterical. "You can't ( ... )

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the best luck I had was you | Xavi+Iniesta | 8/11 anonymous November 6 2010, 17:20:56 UTC
Xavi's team won in the end, but Andres was still smiling as they all jogged off for a water break. Leo was sulking a little and both Deco and Ronaldinho were trying to tease him out of it, and Andres was only a few years older than Leo but he couldn't even remember being that young. It was hard not to feel optimistic about the future when you were watching Leo grow up day by day.

"Good game," Xavi said behind him. "Even if you did cheat."

"You did too," Andres said, and leaned backwards into Xavi, knowing he could support his weight for a moment. "Are you going to tell me what that was about?"

It was a sincere question and Xavi considered it as such, although Andres realized after a moment that his wording had been harsher than he'd intended. "Emili said they weren't sure how I would react to the bonding," he said eventually. "Because they've never seen anyone who could hear everyone the way I can. He said there was a possibility I wouldn't be sensitive to anyone but you anymore. It wasn't a big possibility, or else the míster ( ... )

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mod request anonymous November 6 2010, 17:33:14 UTC
sorry, screwed up posting order - could you delete this whole comment thread starting from the "first" 5/11?

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the best luck I had was you | Xavi+Iniesta | 5/11 anonymous November 6 2010, 17:24:49 UTC
"Good, good. Now, give me your arm …" Emili drew a vial of blood from each of them, did something to it involving an unnaturally blue liquid in a test tube, and then took out fresh syringes and gave them both an injection. The entire process took less than five minutes.

"Wait, is that it?" Andres asked, when Emili didn't start any other medical procedure. He didn't feel any different, except for the weird blurriness at the edges of his vision, and the humming sound… oh.

"Shit, Andrew! Andrew, wake up!" Andres blinked his eyes open. The world was still kaleidoscoping around him in very interesting colors, and for some reason he appeared to be lying on the floor, but he knew the fuzzy lump in front of his face was Xavi. He closed his eyes again, because the dancing lights were starting to make him nauseous, but he still knew exactly where Xavi was. He was pretty sure that they could be standing at opposite ends of a completely dark football pitch and he would know exactly where Xavi was. He could feel Xavi inside his head - his bare ( ... )

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the best luck I had was you | Xavi+Iniesta | 6/11 anonymous November 6 2010, 17:26:03 UTC
Victor and Carles were both hanging out in the parking lot, leaning against Victor's car. They looked like they were having a pretty good time talking to each other, right up until Victor looked up and noticed Xavi and Andres coming towards them. Andres had never seen Victor's mother-hen instinct kick in that quickly, and concluded that he probably looked like absolute shit. "It went fine," he said, pre-empting Victor's inevitable interrogation, as Victor came over to help at the fastest pace possible that could still be called a walk. Between him and Xavi Andres managed to stagger to Victor's car without any mishaps, although he could already tell the late afternoon sunlight was going to give him a headache. Xavi dug in his jacket pocket and came up with a pair of sunglasses that he handed over without comment ( ... )

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